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letter to my friend Dear ... how nice it is to write to you , i'm writing this time to tell you about the last book i have read recently . it is one of the best books i have ever read , it was about a hard life that a kind man have lived , the hero had passed a lot of difficulties in his life . in his infancy, his step mother was so cruel to him. she had treated him like a servant when he grew a little . she made him to in a garage , unluckily, the mechanic there was a cruel man he made fun of others. as he made him work much and insulted him . and so,he didn't give up , he get away from the mechanic . then worked at a book kiosk . and one day , he met a beautiful lady who he admired . he proposed to marry her and she accepted . after long time of successful marriage , they had 2 sons and a daughter thanks for reading . correct my mistakes, please
Aug 31, 2015 11:28 PM
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September 4, 2015
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September 4, 2015
Dear ...  How nice it is to write to you , I'm writing this time to tell you about the last book I recently read. It is one of the best books that I have ever read; it was about a hard life that a kind man had lived, the hero endured many difficulties. When he was born, his step mother was so cruel to him. Growing up, he was treated like a servant by her. She made him work in a garage and the mechanic was a cruel man as well. He made fun of others, he made him work more, and he insulted him. Though he didn't give up! He got away from the mechanic, then he worked at a book kiosk. One day, he met a beautiful lady who he admired. He proposed to her and she accepted. After a long time, of a successful marriage, they had 2 sons and 1 daughter.
September 4, 2015
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