HyunWook Park
Italy Or Spain? These days, I am thinking of travelling to either Italy or Spain. I was actually supposed to make it to Italy since I have got a nice friend in bologna, but I hesitate a bit due to the high cost of hostels there. However, I have found out that things are much cheaper in Spain in terms of everything apart from flight ticket. Many friends of mine have told me that both countries are awesome, so I won't regret whichever I decide to explore. I am just thinking of travelling to Spain for nearly a month and then fly to bologna from Spain as the ticket to it won't be extremely expensive. This is going to be my first trip to Southern Europe, so I am very excited to see it! I am looking forward to seeing the famous tourist attraction as well as meeting so many amazing people waiting for me there.
Sep 1, 2015 6:49 AM
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These days, I am thinking of travelling to either Italy or Spain. I was actually originally supposed to make it go to Italy since I have got a nice good friend in bologna, but I am hesitating a bit due to the high cost of hostels there. However, I have found out that things are everything is much cheaper in Spain in terms of everything apart from the flight ticket. Many friends of mine have told me that both countries are awesome, so I won't shouldn’t regret whichever I decide to explore. 
I am just thinking of travelling to in Spain for nearly a month and then flying to bologna from Spain as the ticket to it won't be extremely expensive. This is going to be my first trip to Southern Europe, so I am very excited to see it! 
I am looking forward to seeing the famous tourist attraction as well as and meeting so many amazing people waiting for me there.

Notes:

<ol> <li>“make it” in this context is…strange.  You could say “…make sure I made it…”</li> <li>“have got” is redundant. Always just put “have”.</li> <li>We would never say, “I have a nice friend.”</li> <li>“However” is based off of the end of the last sentence.  This would mean you are saying “…I am hesitating… However….”.  This would only make sense if your sentence was, “I am hesitating…However, I think I will make up my mind soon.”  The sentence must agree with the previous sentence.</li> <li>“in terms of…” is used to specify something, but “everything” is a generalization.</li> <li>“to Spain for nearly a month” means it will take you one month to arrive in spain.  That would only make sense if you were driving a car from Korea.</li> <li>“waiting for me there” means that many people are in Spain who you already know.  They are not new people.</li> </ol>

Great work.  If you have questions let me know.

September 1, 2015
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