Delia
My good friends at college I have three good friends at college, which are Jasmine, Jo and Amber. Jasmine is a clever girl, she always gives me practical advice whenever I run into some trouble. However, she has a boyfriend who sticks with her all the time, and he even forbids her from going to clubs with us. As for Jo, she is really good at school work, the professor in conversation class likes her a lot because she always gives nice speeches. Her boyfriend is four years older than she, but he still hits off with us well. When it comes to Amber, she is the only one who doesn't have boyfriend in the four of us. She seeks every opportunity to get one all the time, such as in restaurants, in clubs and on parties held on campus. I really hope that she will meet her Mr.right as soon as possible, so we can hang out or take a trip to many places with our boyfriends some day. Anyway, I am lucky to have such wonderful and thoughtful friends, I guess this sisterhood is not what everyone can get.
Sep 1, 2015 9:41 AM
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My Good Friends in College [for titles, you capitalize all major words--e.g. words aside from "in" or "at" or "the" etc]

I have three good friends at  in college, which they are Jasmine, Jo and Amber. Jasmine is a clever girl, she always gives me practical advice whenever I run into some trouble. However, she has a boyfriend who sticks with her all the time, and he even doesn't allow her/let her *forbids her  go* to clubs with us. As for Jo, she is really good at school work, the Professor in conversation class likes her a lot because she always gives nice speeches. Her boyfriend is four years older than hershe, but he still gets along with us hits off with us well.** When it comes to Amber, she is the only one who doesn't have boyfriend in the four of us. She seeks uses every opportunity to get one all the time, such as in restaurants, in clubs and on parties held on campus. I really hope that she will meet her Mr.right as soon as possible, so we can hang out or take a trip to many places with our boyfriends some day. Anyway, I am lucky to have such wonderful and thoughtful friends, I guess this kind of sisterhood cannot be achieved by everyone.  is not what everyone can get.

 

*"forbids her" is correct literally, but it is not very natural. I think the word "to forbid" is very formal. 

**I think you can only use "hit it off" in the way you're trying to use to describe other people, like: "they hit it off."  I haven't really heard people say "he hits off with us well." 

September 2, 2015
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