Gina
Letter with my friend Hi Barbara, I'm writing this letter because I would like to see you this winter. As all summers when you are here, in Ibiza, we never have time for to enjoy together.In summer we only work. In February , Pol has holidays and we haver though that we would like to travel by North of Spain. We are going to rent a van and we want to visit Asturias. People say that meat and "tapas" are spectacular.In my view point I prefer the vegetable but my husband loves meat. We are going to arrive next month, about 14 February, just Valentine's Day. Could you to give me your adress? We will see you? You will be in Asturias that dates? Best wishes and hugs.
Sep 1, 2015 2:17 PM
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Letter with my friend

Hi Barbara,

I'm writing this letter because I would like to see you this winter. As all summers when you are here, in Ibiza, we never have enough time for to enjoy each others company. together . In summer, we only work.
In February, Pol has holidays and we haver thought that we would like to travel by to the North of Spain. We are going to rent a van and we want to visit Asturias.
People say that meat and "tapas" are spectacular in Asturias. In my view point opinion, I prefer the vegetable but my husband loves meat. We are going to arrive next month, about 14 February, just in time for Valentine's Day.
Could you to give me your adress?
We will see you?
Will you will be in Asturias that dates?
Best wishes and hugs.

 

Well done. These edits are just touch ups and will make some sentences sound more natural. 

September 1, 2015
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