now I realize my dream is become an english teacher.
I need many people who make my dream come true. i really want to learn all about english
There are many different ways you can say this - I've tried to make the first one a grammatically correct version of your original, but have also written some common ways we might say it in conversation in English :) Number 3 is probably most common / conversational, I would say.
1. Now I realise my dream is to become an English teacher.
I need lots of people who can help make my dream come true. I really want to learn all about English.
or some alternatives:
2. I have just realised my dream is to become an English teacher.
To make my dream come true, I need lots of people to help me learn to speak English and teach me about the language.
3. I hope to become an English teacher. To achieve this, I would like to meet as many English speakers as possible to learn the language.
I hope this helps! Good luck! x
now I realize my dream is to become an english teacher.
I need many people who make my dream come true.
==>To make my dream com true, I wish to have a lot of friends who speak English fluently.
i really want to learn all about english
==>I want to study English hard~