Julia White
I LOVE YOU ISTANBUL! Every soul needs to plunge in a vortex of unforgettable emotions at least once a life. That moment when you don't sense anything around you, besides of a great pleasure of something. You even do not realise what this feeling is... Only splendour meets every of your step ... no drawbacks.... That is how i feel myself in my lovely city. I LOVE YOU ISTANBUL!
Sep 1, 2015 5:36 PM
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I LOVE YOU, ISTANBUL!

Every soul needs to plunge into a vortex of unforgettable emotions at least once one's life.  [1]
That moment when you don't sense anything around you, other than the great pleasure of something. You even do not realise what this feeling is...  [2]
Only splendour meets every of your step ... no drawbacks....
That is how I feel myself in my lovely city.  [3] 
I LOVE YOU, ISTANBUL!

 

[1]  Variants:  ... at least once in his life.    ... at least once in his or her life.  ... at least once in their life.

[2]  More common variant:  You do not even realise what this feeling is...

[3]  When translating "чувствовать себя" into English, do not translate "себя".   Examples:  I feel wonderful.   She feels sad.   We feel sick.

September 2, 2015
You're in love with the city, you want to soak it in totally.
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