Ellen
20150902 I woke up late in the morning but I am pretty satisfied that I have done almost of my plans. In my opinion, it helps me to concentrate on the things what I have to as well. It was not easy for me to coding and commit to Github everyday. However, Solving the problems in Codewars gives me experiences about code reading and learning what I did not know yet. For increasing of my abilities about sentiment analysis, Now I am interested in Java as well. For making blog with ghost, I learned how to use ssh as well. For reading data written in English, I am training myself to read English book and papers. More than anything, I read Bible everyday for sending others what I read today. I feel like I am trained by God to using time efficiently instead of feeling anxiety from lack of time. I thank to God.
Sep 1, 2015 6:13 PM
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I woke up late in the morning but I am pretty satisfied that I have done almost [all / most] of my plans. 

In my opinion, it helps me to concentrate on the things that I have to as well.
It was not easy for me to code and commit to Github everyday.
However, Solving the problems in Codewars gives me experiences about code reading and learning what I do not know yet.
For increasing of my abilities about sentiment analysis, Now I am interested in Java as well.
Making a blog with ghost, I learned how to use ssh as well.
For reading data written in English, I am training myself to read English book and papers.
More than anything, I read the Bible everyday and send others what I read today.
I feel like I am trained by God to using time efficiently instead of feeling anxiety from lack of time.
I thank to God.

 

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I tried correcting the sentences to the best of my understanding, hopefully I didn't change the intended meaning to any of them..

 

Best luck

September 1, 2015

I woke up late in the this morning but I am pretty satisfied that I have done did almost of my everything I planned. 
In my opinion, it (being productive?) helps me to concentrate on the things what I still have to do as well. 
It was is not easy for me to code and commit time to Github every day. 
However, solving the problems in Codewars makes it easier by giving me experiences about in reading code and learning what I do did not know yet. 
For To increase of my abilities about in sentiment analysis, Now I am interested in learning Java as well. 
For To make a blog with ghost, I learned how to use ssh as well. 
For the sake of reading data written in English, I am training myself to read English books and papers. 
More than anything, I read the Bible everyday. “<em>for sending others what I read today</em>.” 
I feel like I am being trained by God to use time efficiently instead of feeling anxiety from because of lack of time. 
I give thanks to God./ Thanks be to God

 

Notes: 

<ol> <li>You can say, “I finished what I had plans”, but “I did my plans” does not make sense.</li> <li>I don’t know what “it” is.  Based on your previous sentence, “it” is “everything I planned”, but that doesn’t make sense.</li> <li>“Every day” is present tense.</li> <li>“experience” is uncountable in this context, so you don’t say “experiences”</li> <li>You can say, “for the sake of”, but it is easier just to say “to”.  “For” is normally not correct in this context.</li> <li>“<em>for sending others what I read today</em>.” I don’t understand this.  You are reading the bible so you can tell other people about what you read?  Or for yourself?</li> <li>“thanks be to god” would be the normal way to say what you want, even though it is very old language.</li> </ol>

Good work.  If you have any questions let me know.

September 1, 2015
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