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Carmen G.F

ORDERING OFFICE SUPPLIES MARY BLUE Company: ESTRELLA NEWS Sevilla – Spain 3TH SEPTEMBER, 2015 Mr. García Dear Mr.García My department is interested in purchasing a nespresso machine for coffee. We want to use the machine about 30 coffee daily, please send me a catalog and prices of each model that you consider appropriate. I would be grateful if you could answer me quickly. Thanks again for you attention. Sincerely, Carmen G.

Sep 2, 2015 6:49 AM

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ORDERING OFFICE SUPPLIES

MARY BLUE
Company: ESTRELLA NEWS
Sevilla – Spain

3TH SEPTEMBER, 2015

Mr. García

Dear Mr.García
My department is interested in purchasing a nespresso machine for coffee.
We want to use the machine for about 30 coffees daily. Please send me a catalog and prices of each model that you would consider appropriate.
I would be grateful if you could answer me quickly. Thanks again for your attention.
Sincerely,
Carmen G.

September 2, 2015

ORDERING OFFICE SUPPLIES

MARY BLUE
Company: ESTRELLA NEWS
Sevilla – Spain

3TH 3rd SEPTEMBER, 2015

Mr. García

Dear Mr.García
My department is interested in purchasing a Nespresso machine for coffee.
We want to use the machine for about 30 coffees daily (<em>or</em> 30 coffees per day), please send me a catalog and prices of each model that you consider appropriate.
I would be grateful if you could answer me quickly. Thanks again for you attention.
Sincerely,
Carmen G.

My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.

"I would be grateful if you could answer me quickly" - In a formal letter like this, it would sound more polite to say "I would be grateful if you could provide a quick response".

September 2, 2015

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