Yuki
Online Class I should eat healthier.... I've been taking an online class in Child Nutrition and Cooking that made me imagine about having kids and feeding them well even if we're not gonna have kids soon. Before we have kids, we should eat heathier first! In the lecture video, the professor told that we should give a small grass to kids instead of large one so that they can feel the grass is full of drink. That's so good idea! I like that. I'm so excited to take other lectures!
Sep 2, 2015 9:19 AM
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Online Class

I should eat healthier...I've been taking an online class on child nutrition and cooking that made me imagine about having kids and feeding them well, even though I'm not gonna have kids anytime soon. Before we have having kids, we should eat heathier first! In the lecture video, the professor told us that we should give a small glass to kids instead of a large one, so that they can still feel like their glass is full of drink **. That's so such a good idea! I like that. I'm so excited to take other lectures!

 

Just some minor errors and spelling! One sentence was a little strange sounding**, but I understand the main point. Good work!! It sounds like an interesting class :)

September 3, 2015
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