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My healthy lifestyle I try to lead a healthy lifestyle. I do not like fast-food, crisps, fizzy and alcohol drinks (with the exception of wine). We eat lean meats, fish, soups, cereals, vegetables, fruit and the like. But I really do like kebabs and pizza, I can't refuse the meal completely, that's why I eat it once or twice a quarterly. Five months ago I felt a backache. I visited a doctor and he said me to do sport. In addition I long wanted to lose about 15Ibs (~7 kilograms). Then I decided to follow the doctor's advice and bought an annual subscription to a fitness center. It seems it helps me feel better.
Sep 2, 2015 11:22 AM
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My healthy lifestyle

I try to lead a healthy lifestyle. I do not like fast-food, crisps, or fizzy and alcoholic drinks (with the exception of wine). We eat lean meats, fish, soups, cereals, vegetables, fruit and the like. However, I really do like kebabs and pizza. I can't refuse such a meal completely; that's why I eat it once or twice a quarterly every three months.
Five months ago, I had a backache. I visited a doctor and he recommended to me to do sports. In addition, I have long wanted to lose about 15 lbs (~7 kilograms). Then I decided to follow the doctor's advice and bought an annual subscription to a fitness center.
It seems it helps me feel better.

 

<em>One usually does not start a sentence with a conjunction such as "but".</em>

September 4, 2015
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My healthy lifestyle

I try to lead a healthy lifestyle. I do not like fast-food, crisps, fizzy and alcohol drinks (with the exception of wine). We eat lean meats, fish, soups, cereals, vegetables, fruit and the like. But I really do like kebabs and pizza! I can't refuse the meal completely, so I eat it once or twice a quarter.


Five months ago I felt a backache. I visited a doctor and he said me to engage in some sports activities. In addition, for some time, I have wanted to lose about 15Ibs (~7 kilograms). Then I decided to follow the doctor's advice and bought an annual subscription to a fitness center.
It seems it helps me feel better.

September 3, 2015
Кажется, должно быть: It seems it helps me to feel better.
September 2, 2015
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