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Buzzing head I hate those meetings where confusion reigns. Those where who wants to take the floor does it screaming, and those who do not dare to address the audience chat among themselves. My brain is not designed to withstand this. My ears neither. When I go back home after such a meetings I feel my head buzzing for hours, like a hive packed of bees. And I feel nervous. This is why having a cat at home might help in these cases. A nice cat purring and lying with you on the bed is so relaxing. Yes, definitely it would help a lot, unless you have an aggressive and surly cat like mine. I can't ask her for making me feel better. Usually I keep nervous and I just go to the bed. Alone, with thousand bees around my temples.
Sep 2, 2015 12:41 PM
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Buzzing head

I hate those meetings where confusion reigns. Those where who wants to take the floor does it in a screaming manner, and those who do not dare to address the audience chat amongst themselves.
My brain is not designed to withstand this. Neither are my ears neither.
When I go back home after such a meetings I feel my head buzzing for hours, like a hive packed with bees. And I feel nervous.
This is why having a cat at home might help in these cases. A nice cat purring and lying with you on the bed is so relaxing. Yes, definitely it would help a lot, unless you have an aggressive and surly cat like mine. I can't ask her to make me feel better.
Usually I am still nervous and I just go to the bed. Alone, with thousand bees buzzing around my temples.

 

Great job! Especially with all of the metaphors and similies, it really helps with the imagery. Just a few grammatical mistakes, but your English is really good! Keep improving it and you'll be set!

September 2, 2015
*please
September 2, 2015
Pease, correct my mistakes
September 2, 2015
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