Question 7: Write about your friends Hey Jenna, How are you?, It's nice to hear notices about you! To star with I have a lot of friends who I go out every weekend. We are a little team, there are fi

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Question 7: Write about your friends Hey Jenna, How are you?, It's nice to hear notices about you! To star with I have a lot of friends who I go out every weekend. We are a little team, there are five boys and five girls. A year ago there were more people in my friend group but now we are only ten people. Nevertheless I like my little group because we always have things to do and like we are a few people we can go to a friends house to dinner without considerer it like a party so our parents always admits that we can dinner or spend time all together. On the one hand the boys are funny so the girls never get boring with them but on the other hand the girls are always speaking about the cute university or famous boys and about clothes so they always try to catch our attention for speak with us about other things but sometimes they talk with us about the boys hahaha. In short, we can't be separated because we are friends till we have 5 years old and we someone its mad we try to find a solution to make him or her happy :) Jenna I hope you can meet them someday!

Sep 2, 2015 12:42 PM

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Question 7: Write about your friends

Hey Jenna,
How are you?, It's nice to hear news from notices about you!

To star with I have a lot of friends who I go out with every weekend. We are a little team;, there are five boys and five girls. A year ago there were more people in my friend's group but now we are only ten people.
Nevertheless, I like my little group because we always have things to do and like because/since we are not many, a few people we can go to a friend's house to have dinner without being considerered it like a party, so our parents always admits that we can let us have dinner or let us all spend time all together.

<em>Nevertheless, I like my little group because we always have things to do and because/since we are not many, we can go to a friend's house to have dinner without being considerered a big party, so our parents always let us have dinner or let us all spend time together.</em>

On the one hand the boys are funny so the girls never get boring bored with them; but on the other hand the girls are always speaking about the cute university or famous boys and about clothes, so they always try to catch our attention for to speak with us about other things, but sometimes they talk with us about the boys hahaha.
In short, we can't be separated because we are friends till since we have are 5 years old and we when someone its is mad, we try to find a solution to make him or her happy :)

Jenna, I hope you can meet them someday!

September 3, 2015

Escribes tus ideas en inglés muy bien, pero para mejorar lo escrito, te recomiendo que leas acerca de run on sentences ya que tenías muchas de ellas; una vez que sepas usar la puntuación en inglés, tus "writings" van a estar mucho mejor! http://www.myenglishteacher.net/runonsentences.html

September 3, 2015

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