Mireia
DAY 1 IN CROATIA. One day, I was with my friend Mireia in my house when We decided to go to Croatia for our holidays. We bought the tickets two weeks before to leave. During these two weeks, We were organizing the tour for the islands. We didn't know nothing of this country and We did it reading lots of forums and webpages. We booked the hostels too and that was all. My friend Mireia is more adventures than me and she calmed me when I was nervous. I start to explain: We arrived by plain to Dubrovnik at 9:00 o'clock. We looked for the hostel and We decided to go to the old town which is the most beautiful touristic place there It was amazing. The old town is very big and you can walk a lot. We didn't know that It was so hot and We decided to visit the walls. During 3 hours We were walking around them and We thought that We were die. We were very hot and We were wetting a lot. Fortunately, We survived. Instantly, We were to the "beach" (the beach is in the rocks close to the walls). And It was very fun because We met four guys from Sevilla. We were in the water for 2 hours. The views were very nice. We enjoyed a lot. For end, at night, We went to the old town again to drank PIÑA COLADA. Oh my god! They have a lot of this cocktails and it's very very taste. I love piña colada. And when we arrived to the hostel to go to sleep We realized that in our room were two foreign boys, one from Australia and the other one for the States. We were talking a lot. We went to sleep very happy, our day had been perfect. I'll show you some pictures of it.
Sep 2, 2015 7:11 PM
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DAY 1 IN CROATIA.

One day, I was with my friend Mireia in my house when W we decided to go to Croatia for our holidays. We bought the tickets two weeks before to leavinge. During these two weeks, W we were organizinged the tour for around the islands. We didn't know nothing anything of this country and W we did it a lot of reading from lots of forums and webpages. We booked the hostels, too and that was all. My friend Mireia is more adventureous than me and she calmed me when I was nervous.

I'd like start to explain:

We arrived by plain to at Dubrovnik at 9:00 o'clock. We looked for the hostel and W we decided to go to the old town which is the most beautiful touristic place there. It was amazing. The old town is very big and you can walk and it takes a lot of time to get around. a lot. We didn't know that It was so hot and We decided to visit the walls??? . During For 3 hours we were walked around them and we thought that We were going to die. We were very hot and we were wetting sweat a lot.

Fortunately, we survived. InstantlySoon, we were to the on "beach" (the beach is in the rocks close to the walls). And It was very fun because we met four guys from Sevilla. We were in the water swimmed for 2 hours. The views were from the beach very nice.

We enjoyed a lot. For At the end, at night, we went to the old town again to draink PIÑA COLADA. Oh my god! They have a lot of this cocktails and it's very very tastey. I love piña colada.

And when we arrived to at the hostel to go to sleep we realized that in our room were found two foreign boys, one from Australia and the other one for from the States. We were talked a lot.

We went to sleep very happy: our day had been perfect.

I'll show you some pictures of it.

September 6, 2015

DAY 1 IN CROATIA.

One day, I was with my friend Mireia in my house when We decided to go to Croatia for our holidays. We bought the tickets two weeks before <em>leaving.</em> to leave. During these two weeks, We were organizing the tour for the islands. We didn't know <em>anything about </em> nothing of this country <em>so</em> and We did it <em>read </em> ing lots of forums and webpages. We booked the hostels too and that was all. My friend Mireia is more adventures than me and she calmed me when I was nervous.

I start to explain: 

We arrived by pla<em>ne</em> to Dubrovnik at 9:00 o'clock. We looked for the hostel and We decided to go to the old town which is the most beautiful touristic place there. It was amazing. The old town is very big and you can walk a lot. We didn't know that It was so hot and We decided to visit the walls. During <em>For </em>3 hours We were walking around them and We thought that We <em>would</em> were die. We were very hot and We were <em>sweating</em> wetting a lot.

Fortunately, We survived. Instantly <em>Suddenly</em>, We were <em>at</em> to the "beach" (the beach is in the rocks close to the walls). And It was very fun because We met four guys from Sevilla. We were in the water for 2 hours. The views were very nice.

We enjoyed <em>it </em>a lot. For end <em>Finally, that</em> night, We went to the old town again to dr<em>i</em>nk PIÑA COLADA. Oh my god! They have <em>serve </em>a lot of this cocktails <em>(o</em> quieres decir: <em>we had</em> a lot of these cocktails ?) and it's very very tasty. I love piña coladas.

And when we arrived to the hostel to go to sleep We realized that in our room<em> there</em> were two foreign boys, one from Australia and the other one f<em>rom</em> the States. We were talking <em>talked </em>a lot.

We went to sleep very happy, our day had been perfect.

I'll show you some pictures of it.

 

(<em>he estado en Sarajevo hace 2 años..es un lugar mágico) </em>

September 2, 2015
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