Ellen
3th Sept. Sarah invite me her house to have lunch together. After lunch time, Sophie buy me a piece of tiramisu. After that, School gave me a rice cake so I ate it. And then, I had chicken and beer with Hannah. At night, I talked with Russian through the phone. He’s pronunciation is little bit hard to understand. He is so talkative person so he talked almost alone for 2 hours and half. I got only 60% of that. I thought if my English conversation ability is better, the conversation of he and I would be more rich. I think if I train to listen english continuously, It would be so nice to hone my English converstaion skills. I will challenge with reading Bible. I will read Bible wih Korean in the morning when I work out. In addition, I will read Bible with English with voice.
Sep 2, 2015 7:46 PM
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Sarah invite me her house to have lunch together. 
After lunch time, Sophie buy bought me a piece of tiramisu. 
After that, School gave me a rice cake so I ate it. 
And then, I had chicken and beer with Hannah. 
At night, I talked with a Russian man through on the phone. 
His pronunciation is a little bit hard to understand. 
He is so a talkative person so he talked for almost alone for 2 hours and half. 
I understood got only 60% of it that
I thought think if my ability to converse in English conversation ability is gets better, the conversations of he and I have will would be more rich. It would be so nice to hone my English conversation skills, so I think I will train to practice listening to English continuously 
I will challenge myself with reading to read the Bible more. 
I will read the Bible with in Korean in the morning when while I work out. 
In addition, I will read the Bible with in English with corresponding audio voice.



1. The past tense of buy is bought.

2. You talk "on the phone"

3. You don't have to write "alone." It is assumed by the sentence that he is doing most of the talking.

4. I changed the sentence to present tense, because the verbs did not agree. If you wanted it to be in past tense, you would write, "I think if my ability to converse in english was better, our conversations would be more rich."

5. You start your sentence with "if", but there is no "then".  So I changed the sentence...

6. I don't understand the last sentence.  Will you read the bible in english, listen to it in english, or both?

 

Good work.

September 4, 2015
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