Scott Savage
中文三零一作业 大家好! Sorry I have been offline so much lately! I currently have 24 messages in my inbox and I plan to get back to them soon. Recently, my screen broke on my laptop so I've been unable to reply. I am taking Chinese 301 at my 大学. I have a few sentences I wrote that I'd love help reviewing. Please submit any corrections in a message or below! 谢谢!加油! 有时候在卑贱女性的社会条件,我感觉关心。 除了犹他州以外,美国的州有很多咖啡厅。 你可不可以推荐有意思的中国音乐? 从我地点来看,岳父加班得很。 听起来我这一代根本不想儿童。 昨天老妈提到我的家都希望小宝宝快快能国步行。 你的专业是中文;难怪你看起来很困惑! 后天为了开玩笑,弟弟把妈妈的家具安排得乱七八糟。 爷爷死了以后,我取得大型小区。 太太说,“从我们结婚来,你长更胖。应该到健身房去!”
Sep 3, 2015 3:45 AM
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中文三零一作业

大家好!

Sorry I have been offline so much lately! I currently have 24 messages in my inbox and I plan to get back to them soon. Recently, my screen broke on my laptop so I've been unable to reply. I am taking Chinese 301 at my 大学. I have a few sentences I wrote that I'd love help reviewing. Please submit any corrections in a message or below!

谢谢!加油!

在现实的生活中,我会经常关注歧视女性的问题。
除了犹他州以外,美国其它州都有很多咖啡厅。
你可不可以推荐一些有意思的中国音乐?
在我看来,岳父经常加班得很晚。
从表面上看,我们这一代人好像都不想要小孩。 
昨天老妈提到我的家人都希望小宝宝能快快学会走路。
你的专业是中文;难怪你看起来有很多困惑!中文太难学了! 
弟弟给老妈开了个玩笑,把她的家具摆得乱七八糟。
爷爷去世以后,我搬到了一个大型小区。
太太说:“我们结婚后,你变胖了。应该到健身房去!”

September 4, 2015

中文三零一作业

大家好!

Sorry I have been offline so much lately! I currently have 24 messages in my inbox and I plan to get back to them soon. Recently, my screen broke on my laptop so I've been unable to reply. I am taking Chinese 301 at my 大学. I have a few sentences I wrote that I'd love help reviewing. Please submit any corrections in a message or below!

谢谢!加油!

有时候卑贱不时的歧视女性的社会条件现象,我感觉关心特别关注
除了犹他州以外,美国的州有很多咖啡厅。
你可不可以推荐有意思的中国音乐?
从我的观点来看,岳父加班工作忙得很【或加班太多】。
听起来我这一代根本不想儿童 要孩子【是这个意思吗?】
昨天老妈提到我的家都希望小宝宝快快能国步行 快点学会走路
你的专业是中文;难怪你看起来很困惑【中文专业有什么可困惑的吗?不解!】有文化
为了开玩笑,弟弟把妈妈的家具安排摆放得乱七八糟。【有开这种玩笑的吗?不解!】
爷爷死了以后,我取得搬到一个大型小区。
太太说,“<em></em>我们结婚<em></em>,你长更胖 越来越胖了。应该到健身房去!”

September 3, 2015
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