Is it correct,please ? Is it correct,please ? (My Dear Alexander supertramp, If I had your half courage, if I could be liberated from all the constraints .. from my meaningless life , I would finall

Rehab Shaban

Is it correct,please ? Is it correct,please ? (My Dear Alexander supertramp, If I had your half courage, if I could be liberated from all the constraints .. from my meaningless life , I would finally test the real meaning of the life away from this Killer community. Peace for your free soul .)

Sep 3, 2015 1:02 PM

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Is it correct,please ?

Is this correct,please ?
(My Dear Alexander supertramp, If I had half your courage, if I could be liberated from all the constraints .. from my meaningless life , I would finally test the real meaning of life away from this Killer community. Peace to your free soul .)

Well written! Just a couple of mistakes but it did not displace the essence and purpose of your message.

September 3, 2015

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