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Email FCE Dear debbie Hello, how are you? It has been a while since the last time we spoke. I want to thank you for your invitation. I'm really excited about staying in Scotland and I can't wait to go to the summer festival with you. Talking of the programme of the event, I made some research on the Internet and I would rather you booked the tickets for "The merchant of venice", because I'm very keen on Shakespeare. If it is ok for you, a couple of central seats will be perfet so that we can both see the acting and hear decently without paying a fortune. Then, in case the weather is good, I would enjoy going to the seaside and eating something typical. I heard haggis is one of the best dishes, we could have it at the festival !! Thank your aunt on my behalf for her hospitaliy and let me know if there's something I could get to her from Italy. I'm looking forward to seeing you ! Kisses Penelope
Sep 3, 2015 5:12 PM
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Email FCE

Dear,  Debbie, 

Hello, how are you? It has been a while since the last time we spoke. I want to thank you for your invitation. I'm really excited about staying in Scotland, and I can't wait to go to the summer festival with you. Talking of the programme of the event, I made did some research on the Internet and I would rather you booked the tickets for "The Merchant of Venice", because I'm very keen on Shakespeare.


If it is ok for you, a couple of central seats will be perfect so that we can both see the acting and hear decently without paying a fortune. Then, in case if <em>((not gramatically incorrect, but "in case" is usually used if you're talking about something negative-- "In case the weather is bad"))</em><em> </em>the weather is good, I would enjoy going to the seaside and eating something typical. I heard haggis is one of the best dishes -- we could have it at the festival!! Thank your aunt on my behalf for her hospitaliy, and let me know if there's something I could get to her from Italy. I'm looking forward to seeing you!

Kisses, 
Penelope

September 3, 2015
Very well written. Just some minor corrections -- mostly punctuation.
September 3, 2015
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