I hope to be a good person. I want to live in peace till my death. Life is short, I hope to do good to people and help every one during my life. I wanna be patient and kind! You know what, that sort o

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I hope to be a good person. I want to live in peace till my death. Life is short, I hope to do good to people and help every one during my life. I wanna be patient and kind! You know what, that sort of people when you read orhear about you feel you love them and their morals even if you never met them. I hope to become one of those people.

Sep 3, 2015 11:28 PM

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I hope to be a good person/My aim is to be a virtuous person.

I want to live in peace until (*till) my death. Life is too short, so I hope to do good for people (others) and help everyone during my life (lifetime). I *want to be patient and kind! You know what, I wish to be like those sort (type, kind) of people whom you read or hear about, and you feel as though you love them and their morals even if you have never met them in person. I hope to become one of those people (individuals, persons), God willing.

*"Till" is the less formal way of saying "until".

*"Wanna" is an informal contraction, so I changed it to "want to".

September 10, 2015

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