I'm reading my first book in english :D Hello, I just want to share a little about my learnings of the last days and receive corrections from you. A month ago I bought a new book called "The Illust

Jamart Peres

I'm reading my first book in english :D Hello, I just want to share a little about my learnings of the last days and receive corrections from you. A month ago I bought a new book called "The Illustrated Man" by Ray Bradbury, I chose this one because one of my favourite books is written by him, (Fahrenheit 451), and because I liked the name of the book, whatever book about someone intelligent is good for me because I like to see if that intelligence is real or just an attempt to hahaha, I'm trying to be like Socrates looking for clever men hahahaha (: But actually the book is not about a smart man or something like that, is about a man who has tattoos in his body and each tattoo has a different tale, so the book is divided in tales, I read the first story and it was difficult because I couldn't understand a lot of words, but I understand the main idea :D So now I'm a little confused because I don't know if someone who speaks english also could confuse the title of the book or if it's just my bad english. Thank you for the correction :D

Sep 4, 2015 3:55 AM

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I'm reading my first book in English :D

Hello, I just want to share a little about my learnings of what I learned (it sounds better than using learning as a noun) the last days and receive corrections from you.
A month ago, I bought a new book called "The Illustrated Man" by Ray Bradbury, I chose this one because one of my favourite/favorite (American spelling) books is written by him, (Fahrenheit 451), and because I liked the name of the book. whatever Any book about someone intelligent is good for me because I like to see if that intelligence is real or just an attempt to hahaha. I'm trying to be like Socrates looking for clever men hahahaha (: But actually the book is not about a smart man or something like that. It is about a man who has tattoos in on his body and each tattoo has a different tale, so the book is divided in tales. I read the first story, and it was difficult because I couldn't understand a lot of words, but I understand the main idea :D So now I'm a little confused because I don't know if someone who speaks English also could confuse the title of the book or if it's just my bad English.
Thank you for the corrections :D

Hello, Jamart! I enjoyed reading your entry. Watch out for punctuation and grammar. Other than that, it was pretty good! Congrats on reading your first book in English. I hope you like it.

September 19, 2015

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