Today is my first day
My name is Julián Sánchez, I'm from Veracruz, my favorite soccer/football team is Real Madrid, and my favorite player soccer is Zinedine Zidane. My favorite hobbies are listening to music and watching tv, and my favorite singer is Miguel Bosé. I am on this page, because I want to learn english and improve my vocabulary, which I hope I can do on this website.
Good introduction! Note: sometimes "I" is written "i," especially on the internet, but "I" is the correct way.
Today is my frist day
My name is Julián Sánchez, and I am from Veracruz. My favorite team in football/soccer is Real Madrid, and my favorite player soccer is Zinedine Zidane. My favorite hobbie is listening to music and watching tv. My favorite singer is Miguel Bosé, and I am on this page because I like to learn English and improve my vocabulary, for which I hope that this website can help.
Some notes about my edits:
- every sentence is an idea with a noun and verb. In this paragraph, I shortened the ideas to a two sentence combination. I ended the ideas with a period.
- between each sentence is the conjunction "and"; I personally like to put a comma before those types of conjunctions because it helps your reader slow down and prepare for the next idea (the next noun and verb).
Keep up the good work!