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我很喜欢吃水果 我很喜欢吃水果。我每天早饭吃米饭和香蕉还别的水果、-例如、在冬天苹果,春天草莓,夏天瓜。午饭以后我总是吃水果。冬天桔子或者葡萄,夏天桃子或者西瓜。我们夏天有的时候晚饭只吃瓜。 我冬天喜欢喝热水和柠檬。我夏天喜欢冰柠檬汁水。 I like fruit. Everyday for breakfast I eat rice with banana and other fruit-like apples in winter, in spring with strawberries and in summer with melon. After lunch I always eat fruit. In winter oranges or grapes, in summer peach or melon. In summer we sometimes have melon for dinner. In winter Ilike to drink hot water with lemon, in summer I like iced water with lemon juice. aim of text - fruit vocabulary.
Sep 4, 2015 8:31 PM
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我很喜欢吃水果

我很喜欢吃水果。我每天早饭吃米饭和香蕉还(有)别的水果,例如:在冬天(吃)苹果,春天(吃)草莓,夏天(吃)瓜。午饭以后我总是吃水果。冬天(吃)桔子或者葡萄,夏天(吃)桃子或者西瓜。我们夏天有的时候晚饭只吃瓜。
我冬天喜欢喝热水和柠檬(水)。我夏天喜欢(喝)冰柠檬汁
I like fruit. Everyday for breakfast I eat rice with banana and other fruit-like apples in winter, in spring with strawberries and in summer with melon. After lunch I always eat fruit. In winter oranges or grapes, in summer peach or melon. In summer we sometimes have melon for dinner. In winter Ilike to drink hot water with lemon, in summer I like iced water with lemon juice.

aim of text - fruit vocabulary.

September 5, 2015

我很喜欢吃水果

我很喜欢吃水果。我每天早饭(/餐)吃(米)饭,搭配香蕉和其它的水果。例如在冬天(選擇)苹果,春天草莓,夏天類的水果。午饭()后我总是習慣吃水果。冬天桔子或者葡萄,夏天有桃子或者西瓜。有的时候,我们夏天晚饭只吃西瓜。
我冬天喜欢喝热水柠檬。我夏天喜欢冰柠檬水。


I like fruit. Everyday for breakfast I eat rice with banana and other fruit-like apples in winter, in spring with strawberries and in summer with melon. After lunch I always eat fruit. In winter oranges or grapes, in summer peach or melon. In summer we sometimes have melon for dinner. In winter Ilike to drink hot water with lemon, in summer I like iced water with lemon juice.

aim of text - fruit vocabulary~Maybe on next topic, you can try to describe "rice", such as 白飯、五穀飯、稀飯、廣東粥、海鮮粥... 等等的飯類主食。

瓜類的水果除了西瓜,還有哈密瓜、香瓜...(...頂呱呱~It's a joke.)

September 6, 2015

                                                                我很喜欢吃水果

我很喜欢吃水果。我每天早餐吃米饭,以及香蕉和一些别的水果,例如,冬季吃苹果、春季吃草莓、夏季吃瓜。午饭以后我也常常吃水果,冬季吃桔子或葡萄,夏季吃桃子或西瓜。夏天里有时我们把西瓜当作晚餐。冬季我喜欢喝热柠檬水,夏季我喜欢喝冰柠檬汁。
       

短文写得不错唷。请注意:标点符号的使用,一定要符合中文的习惯。


I like fruit. Everyday for breakfast I eat rice with banana and other fruit-like apples in winter, in spring with strawberries and in summer with melon. After lunch I always eat fruit. In winter oranges or grapes, in summer peach or melon. In summer we sometimes have melon for dinner. In winter Ilike to drink hot water with lemon, in summer I like iced water with lemon juice.

aim of text - fruit vocabulary.

September 5, 2015

我很喜欢吃水果

我很喜欢吃水果。我每天早饭吃米饭和香蕉还别的水果、例如、在冬天苹果,春天草莓,夏天吃瓜。午饭以后我总是吃水果。冬天桔子或者葡萄,夏天桃子或者西瓜。我们夏天有的时候晚饭只吃瓜。
我冬天喜欢喝热水和柠檬(熱水加檸檬or熱檸檬水)。我夏天喜欢冰柠檬。 

I like fruit. Everyday for breakfast I eat rice with banana and other fruit-like apples in winter, in spring with strawberries and in summer with melon. After lunch I always eat fruit. In winter oranges or grapes, in summer peach or melon. In summer we sometimes have melon for dinner. In winter Ilike to drink hot water with lemon, in summer I like iced water with lemon juice.

aim of text - fruit vocabulary.

September 5, 2015
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