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it is written well My name is Jesus, and living in Mexico. Im have 30 years old. I like practice exersice and sport.
Sep 4, 2015 10:09 PM
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It is well written.

My name is Jesus, and I  live in Mexico.
Im am 30 years old and I like exercising and sport.

September 4, 2015

It is written well?

My name is Jesus, and I am living in Mexico.
I'm have 30 years old. I like practice to exersice and play sports.

September 5, 2015

it is written well (Either "It is well written" or "Is it well written?")

My name is Jesus, and (I am living/I live) in Mexico. ("I am living" sounds more temporary, "I live" suggests a long period of time and perhaps that you are from Mexico.)


I'm have 30 years old. I like practice to exersice and play sports.

September 5, 2015
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