yutaka
A Diary It was my day off today. In the morning, I went to a hospital to have a doctor look at my right knee. It's been aching this past few days. Unfortunately, my regular doctor was absent today. So, another doctor examined my right knee and he prescribed some cold patches for me. Now I've put them on my lower back and right knee. (While writing the sentences above, I fell asleep without realizing.) After that, I went to a rental CD shop. I rented for 5 CDs there. All of them are performed by 'Love Psychedelico'. I'm really into the artist these days. (Originally, I wrote this diary two days ago.)
Sep 5, 2015 4:11 AM
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A Diary

It was my day off today. In the morning, I went to a hospital to have a doctor look at my right knee. It's been aching this past few days.

In the morning, I went to the hospital to have a doctor look at my right knee. 


Unfortunately, my regular doctor was absent today. So, another doctor examined my right knee and he prescribed some cold patches for me. Now I've put them on my lower back and right knee.

Unfortunately, my regular doctor was absent today, so another doctor examined my right knee. He prescribed some cold patches for me.
(While writing the sentences above, I fell asleep without realizing.)

After that, I went to a rental CD shop. I rented for 5 CDs there. All of them are performed by 'Love Psychedelico'. I'm really into the artist these days.

 

You can also just say >> All of them are by Love Psychodelico.

I'm really into this artist these days.


(Originally, I wrote this diary two days ago.)

 

You did a really good job  ~

September 5, 2015
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