My town.

I live in Huétor Tájar, which is a town of in Granada. I live have lived here since I was born, I like this it because it is a peaceful place. When I was child, my friends and I played in the street so we enjoy and we enjoyed it  a lot. The town where I live is medium sized and quiet, but you will find a lot of services too. For example, there are supermarkets, clothes shops, bars, restaurants, and a public swimming pool… However Also, the town is near to the countryside so you can walk here and relax you. In this town everybody knows everybody, so when you are walking in the street, you will always see someone who you know and you everyone will say hello.

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A couple of your verbs just needed to be past tense instead of present  

My town.

I live in Huétor Tájar, which is a town of Granada. I live here since I was born, I like this because is a peaceful place. When I was child, my friends and I played in the street so we enjoy a lot. The town where I live is medium sized and quiet, but you will find a lot of services too. For example, there are supermarket, clothes shops, bars, restaurants, public swimming pool… However, the town is near to the countryside so you can walk here and relax you. In this town everybody knows about  everybody, so when you are walking in the street, you will always see someone who you know and you will say hello.