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IELTS Task 2 - Allowance of jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employees from poor countries. GIVEN TASK: "Rich countries should allow jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employees who are from poor countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" Nowadays, a rising number of skilled and capable people from underdeveloped countries decide to move to developed nations to find a worthwhile job. Whether they should be granted availability of jobs is a controversial issue on which there are conflicting opinions. As far as I am concerned, qualified immigrants should be regarded as a resource; therefore, both state institutions and private companies should grant them the opportunity to work. As our societies are becoming increasingly multicultural, many are of the opinion that providing a high number of experts from poor countries with job opportunities could be counterproductive. However wealthy a nation may be, it does not mean it can grant employment to an unlimited number of individuals. This may result in negative consequences for domestic workers, who may suddenly find themselves unemployed, and for young graduates, who may not manage to find an occupation after having completed their higher education programme. Nevertheless, allowing jobs for specialists from developing nations may have several beneficial effects on the economy of rich countries, as well as on the quality of the services they offer. In facts, skilled workers who come from another social and working context may contribute to the profits of a company by bringing different perspectives, thus helping it remain vital and flexible. Furthermore, educated immigrants are undoubtedly essential to the wealthy nations' education systems. For instance, universities could not provide quality language courses without relying on native-speaker teachers who come from the target-language countries. To conclude, although employing people from poor economies may have some drawbacks, I am of the view that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages and that rich countries should commit to providing job opportunities to all of those who possess the required skills.

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IELTS Task 2 - Allowance of jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employees from poor countries.

GIVEN TASK: "Rich countries should allow jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employees who are from poor countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"

Nowadays, a rising number of skilled and capable people from underdeveloped countries
decide to move to developed nations to find a worthwhile job. Whether they should be granted
availability of jobs is a controversial issue on which there are conflicting opinions. As far as I
am concerned, qualified immigrants should be regarded as a resource; therefore, both state
institutions and private companies should grant them the opportunity to work.

As our societies are becoming increasingly multicultural, many are of the opinion that providing
a high number of experts from poor countries with job opportunities could be counterproductive. However wealthy a nation may be, it does not mean it can grant
employment to an unlimited number of individuals. This may result in negative consequences
for domestic workers, who may suddenly find themselves unemployed, and for young
graduates, who may not manage to find an occupation after having completed their higher
education programme.

Nevertheless, allowing jobs for specialists from developing nations may have several beneficial effects on the economy of rich countries, as well as on the quality of the services they offer. In facts, skilled workers who come from another social and working context may contribute to the profits of a company by bringing different perspectives, thus helping it remain vital and flexible. Furthermore, educated immigrants are undoubtedly essential to the wealthy nations' education systems. For instance, universities could not provide quality language courses without relying on native-speaker teachers who come from the target-language countries.

To conclude, although employing people from poor economies may have some drawbacks, I
am of the view (It is my view/perspective) that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages and that rich countries should
commit to providing job opportunities to all of those who possess the required skills.

Wow, your English is impecible. I no doubt would think that you were a native English speaker if I was reading this in a magazine or other resource. That was absolutely amazingly well done! Absolutely phenomenal! Great job!

September 5, 2015