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Violent Movies During the last decades, the movies developed a lot in terms of their ideas, the reality of scene, and how they can touch the real life. Back to the 30th from the last century, the movies were silent so the actors show too much of face expression to convey their ideas. Also, the movies did not show violent in their scene. Most of them were about comedy and how to make people laugh. The movies developed rapidly and now it could affect people's life and decisions. Some director believe, that their movies should convey a message to people to solve specific problems, such as crimes, drugs, and teenagers problems. Others, believe that their movies should entertain the people no matter what if they use violent movies or comedy movies, Many want to ensure that they earn a good money out of it. For many reasons concerned to the modern society, the teenagers like to see violent. Thus, a lot of movies now adays are about fighting, killing or tourchering. It is accepted to some level of violent, but not very violent. Some people commit crime after they see some violent movies and the problem is they immitated the same way of killing that they see in the movies. Therefore, I strongly believe that violent movies should be restricted to teenagers and the movies producers should say clearly if their movies affect the teenager life. Some doctors belive that violent movies are accepted to releave the anger which established day after day inside people. People feel of anger against society, government and their families. I do not know how watching a man tourchering another one could solve the problem of angure!. Many people believe these movies will give a bad effect to their children in future and they speak seriously against it. Nevertheless, the film makers still make a lot of them.
Sep 5, 2015 4:12 PM
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Violent Movies

During the last decades, the movies developed a lot in terms of their ideas, the reality of scene, and how they can touch the[upon] real life. (While these "the"s aren't gramatically wrong, this isn't native style. "Upon" is a more academic-sounding phrase that may be what you're looking for.)
Back to the 30th from the last century [In the early 20th century] (This bit would make no sense to a native speaker, and is a misunderstanding of time expressions. What were you trying to say?)

, the movies were silent so the actors showed too much[many] of face[facial] expressions to convey their ideas. ("Show" may not be the word you want here. Maybe "Relied on")

Also, the movies did not show violent[Violence] in their scenes. Most of them were about comedy and how to make people laugh. (This phrasing makes it sound like these films were instructional, not comedies themselves.) 

 

(I hope to come back and comment some more, but I've tun out of time for now)

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The movies developed rapidly and now it could affect people's life and decisions.
Some director believe, that their movies should convey a message to people to solve specific problems, such as crimes, drugs, and teenagers problems. Others, believe that their movies should entertain the people no matter what if they use violent movies or comedy movies, Many want to ensure that they earn a good money out of it. For many reasons concerned to the modern society, the teenagers like to see violent. Thus, a lot of movies now adays are about fighting, killing or tourchering.
It is accepted to some level of violent, but not very violent. Some people commit crime after they see some violent movies and the problem is they immitated the same way of killing that they see in the movies. Therefore, I strongly believe that violent movies should be restricted to teenagers and the movies producers should say clearly if their movies affect the teenager life. Some doctors belive that violent movies are accepted to releave the anger which established day after day inside people. People feel of anger against society, government and their families.
I do not know how watching a man tourchering another one could solve the problem of angure!. Many people believe these movies will give a bad effect to their children in future and they speak seriously against it. Nevertheless, the film makers still make a lot of them.

September 5, 2015
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