Eduardo
Today n the last days I have felt a queer sensation in my heart, is like a drum beat it strongly my chest, that happened around 8:00 in the morning, today I went to the nursing to check my pressure but all was ok. They say that I must check my cholesterol, so I going to call to my doctor for get a consultation.
Sep 26, 2015 2:19 AM
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Today

In the last days I have felt a queer sensation in my heart. It is like a drum beating strongly in my chest. This happened around 8:00 in the morning. Today I went to the nurse to check my pressure but all was ok.
They say that I must check my cholesterol, so I am going to call to my doctor to get a consultation.

 

<em>[Good work.  Use shorter sentences.  I hope everything is all right.]</em>

September 26, 2015

Today

In the last days I have felt a queer sensation in my heart. It is like a drum beating strongly in my chest, this happened around 8:00 in the morning. Today I went to the nurse to check my pressure but all was ok.
They say that I must check my cholesterol, so I´m going to call to my doctor to get a consultation.

October 4, 2015
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