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问题的生活 / Life's problems 问题的生活。 我们每天临很多问题。有的问题很容易解决。 比如没有牛奶,我忘了打电话一名客人。有的问题很难解决。比如找到工作,挣钱,教孩子, 家人关系。而且有的问题也许重要的,我们还不知道。电话坏了, 老婆生气,我的女儿哭。除了我们每天有今天的问题,另外还有昨天的没有解决的问题。 虽然我们有很多的问题, 但是人们很喜欢解决问题。 每次我们解决一个问题我们的生活进步一点,而且我们感觉开心。修理电脑, 找到那丢的东西。无问题的生命不是真生命。 欢迎明天的问题! Life’s problems Everyday we have a lot of problems. Some are easily solved. For example there is no milk, I forgot to call customer. Some are difficult to solve, find a job, earn money, educate children, family relationships. And then there are some problems that we still don’t know if they are important or not- a broken phone, my wife is angry, my daughter is crying. Apart from today's problems we also have yesterday’s unresolved problems. Although there are a lot of problems people enjoy solving problems. Every time we solve a problem our life moves on a bit, and also we feel happy. – Fix the computer, find something we lost. A life without problems isn't a real life. I welcome tomorrow’s problems! The aim of the text is to talk about problems as I think it is a usual conversation topic.
Oct 3, 2015 6:04 PM
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问题的生活(的问题) / Life's problems

问题的生活(的问题) 
我们每天(面)临很多问题。有的问题很容易解决。 比如没有牛奶(了),我忘了打电话(给)一名客人。有的问题很难解决。比如找工作,挣钱,教孩子,(与)家人(的)关系。而且有的问题也许(是)重要的,我们还不知道。电话坏了, 老婆生气(了),我的女儿(在)哭。除了我们每天有今天的问题,另外还有昨天的没有解决的问题。
虽然我们有很多的问题, 但是人们很喜欢解决问题。 每次我们解决(了)一个问题我们的生活(就会)进步一点,而且我们(会)感觉开心。修理(好)电脑, 找到那丢的东西。(没有)问题的生(活)不是真(实的)生(活)

欢迎明天的问题!

Life’s problems
Everyday we have a lot of problems. Some are easily solved. For example there is no milk, I forgot to call customer. Some are difficult to solve, find a job, earn money, educate children, family relationships. And then there are some problems that we still don’t know if they are important or not- a broken phone, my wife is angry, my daughter is crying. Apart from today's problems we also have yesterday’s unresolved problems.
Although there are a lot of problems people enjoy solving problems. Every time we solve a problem our life moves on a bit, and also we feel happy. – Fix the computer, find something we lost. A life without problems isn't a real life.
I welcome tomorrow’s problems!

The aim of the text is to talk about problems as I think it is a usual conversation topic.

October 4, 2015

<em>生活</em><em></em>问题 / Life's problems


我们每天临很多(的)问题。有的问题很容易解决比如没有牛奶忘了打电话一名顧客(客人 has two meanings of family guests and company's customers)。有的问题很难解决(不是一時可以處理好的)比如找工作挣钱教孩子、與家人(的)关系。而且有的问题也许重要,我们还不知道,像是电话坏了,老婆生气,我女儿哭。我们每天<em>除了</em>有今天的问题,另外还有昨天没有(/尚未)解决的问题。
虽然我们有很多的问题, 但是人们樂於解决问题。 每次我们解决一个问题我们的生活就會进步一点,而且我们會因此感觉(/到)开心,像是修理电脑, 找到那不見了的东西。无问题的生活,並不是真正的人

欢迎明天的问题!

Life’s problems
Everyday we have a lot of problems. Some are easily solved. For example there is no milk, I forgot to call customer. Some are difficult to solve, find a job, earn money, educate children, family relationships. And then there are some problems that we still don’t know if they are important or not- a broken phone, my wife is angry, my daughter is crying. Apart from today's problems we also have yesterday’s unresolved problems.
Although there are a lot of problems people enjoy solving problems. Every time we solve a problem our life moves on a bit, and also we feel happy. – Fix the computer, find something we lost. A life without problems isn't a real life.
I welcome tomorrow’s problems!

The aim of the text is to talk about problems as I think it is a usual conversation topic.

October 4, 2015

Overall it is a very good one! The mistakes are just minor. I think you can also pay a little more attention on the punctuation marks.

 

生活的问题/ Life's problems

Mary's problems --Mary的问题, so life's problems should be 生活的问题, rather than 问题的生活.


我们每天临很多问题。有的问题很容易解决比如没有牛奶,(或者)我忘了打电话给(一名)客人。Remember to connect the relevant sentences using "," rather than "。" all the way.

给客人 is fine or even better to me. Because here you don't have to emphasize 一名.

有的问题很难解决比如找到工作挣钱教孩子、处理家人关系。而且有的问题也许重要的,我们还不知道——电话坏了, 老婆生气,我的女儿哭。

This sounds better to my ears:而且,有的问题我们还不知道它们是否重要——电话坏了、我老婆生气、女儿哭了。

除了我们每天有今天的问题,另外还有昨天的没有解决的问题。

It is fine, just to simplify it: 除了今天的问题,我们还有昨天的未解决的问题。
虽然(我们)有很多的问题, 但是人们很喜欢解决问题。 每次我们解决一个问题我们的生活进步一点,而且我们感觉/感到开心——修理电脑, 找到丢的东西。

无问题的生命不是真生命。I would write:没有问题的生命不是真正的生命, because it is emphasizing the REAL life.

欢迎明天的问题!

 


Life’s problems
Everyday we have a lot of problems. Some are easily solved. For example there is no milk, I forgot to call customer. Some are difficult to solve, find a job, earn money, educate children, family relationships. And then there are some problems that we still don’t know if they are important or not- a broken phone, my wife is angry, my daughter is crying. Apart from today's problems we also have yesterday’s unresolved problems.
Although there are a lot of problems people enjoy solving problems. Every time we solve a problem our life moves on a bit, and also we feel happy. – Fix the computer, find something we lost. A life without problems isn't a real life.
I welcome tomorrow’s problems!

The aim of the text is to talk about problems as I think it is a usual conversation topic.

October 8, 2015

问题的生活 / Life's problems

问题的生活。
生活中的问题

我们每天很多问题。
(我们每天都面临着/都将面临很多问题。)
有的问题很容易解决。
比如没有牛奶,我忘了打电话一名客人
(比如没有牛奶或者我忘了给一位客人打电话。)
有的问题很难解决。
比如找到工作,挣钱,教孩子,家人关系。
                                  (处理家人间的关系
而且有的问题也许重要的,我们还不知道。
(而且有的问题也许很重要只是我们还不知道。)
电话坏了, 老婆生气(),我的女儿哭()。
除了我们每天有今天的问题,另外还有昨天的没有解决的问题。
我们每天除了眼前的问题, )
虽然我们有很多的问题, 但是人们很喜欢解决问题。
                              (但是我们也很喜欢解决问题)

每次我们解决一个问题我们的生活(就/都)进步一点,而且我们感觉开心。
修理电脑, 找到那丢的东西
           (找到丢了的东西。)
无问题的生命不是真生命。

欢迎明天的问题!

Life’s problems
Everyday we have a lot of problems. Some are easily solved. For example there is no milk, I forgot to call customer. Some are difficult to solve, find a job, earn money, educate children, family relationships. And then there are some problems that we still don’t know if they are important or not- a broken phone, my wife is angry, my daughter is crying. Apart from today's problems we also have yesterday’s unresolved problems.
Although there are a lot of problems people enjoy solving problems. Every time we solve a problem our life moves on a bit, and also we feel happy. – Fix the computer, find something we lost. A life without problems isn't a real life.
I welcome tomorrow’s problems!

The aim of the text is to talk about problems as I think it is a usual conversation topic.

October 5, 2015

生活的问题/ Life&#039;s problems

生活的问题
我们每天都要面临很多问题。有的问题很容易解决。 比如没有牛奶,忘了打电话一名客人。有的问题很难解决。找工作,挣钱,教孩子, 家人关系。而且有的问题也许重要我们还不知道。电话坏了, 老婆生气,我的女儿哭。除了我们每天有今天的问题,另外还有昨天没有解决的问题。
虽然我们有很多的问题, 但是人们很喜欢解决问题。比如修理电脑和找到遗失的东西,每次我们解决一个问题我们的生活进步一点,而且我们感觉开心。修理电脑, 找到那丢的东西。无问题的生命不是真生命。

迎接明天的问题!

Life’s problems
Everyday we have a lot of problems. Some are easily solved. For example there is no milk, I forgot to call customer. Some are difficult to solve, find a job, earn money, educate children, family relationships. And then there are some problems that we still don’t know if they are important or not- a broken phone, my wife is angry, my daughter is crying. Apart from today&#039;s problems we also have yesterday’s unresolved problems.
Although there are a lot of problems people enjoy solving problems. Every time we solve a problem our life moves on a bit, and also we feel happy. – Fix the computer, find something we lost. A life without problems isn&#039;t a real life.
I welcome tomorrow’s problems!

The aim of the text is to talk about problems as I think it is a usual conversation topic.

October 3, 2015
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