Jungwon Kim
Infant care About 2 and half months ago, my baby was born. Since that, my hobby became an infant care. In order to write about it, I need to learn some words on it. For example, diaper, vaccination and so on. From birth to 1 month, it was so hard to feed whenever my baby asked. He asked it every 2 hours. Of course, I did it with my wife. :) Even if so, it was not easy. I'm sure if you are a parent, you definitely understand it. From the beginning of 2 month, the feeding term became longer than before from 2 hours to 3 or 3 and half. At night, he slept more than 5 hours without waking up. Finally, I can have time to write here. I heard some western countries' parents try to teach their babies sleep education which means a baby fall a sleep alone, by himself without parent's holding. I think I can teach my baby falling a sleep without my holding. But what if something emergency such as airway obstruction happened after falling a sleep alone, how do you handle it? I think it might not be easy to handle it quickly if parents sleep in a different room.
Oct 4, 2015 3:15 AM
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About 2 and half months ago, my baby was born. 

Since that then, my hobby became an infant care. In order to write about it, I need to learn some new vocabulary words on it
For example: diaper, vaccination and so on. 

From birth to 1 month For the first month, it was so hard to feed the baby whenever every time my baby he asked for food. He asked for it every 2 hours. 
Of course, I did it with also had my wife. :) Even if so, it was not easy. I'm sure if you are a parent, you definitely understand this it

From the beginning of 2 month, After 2 months, the time between feedings term became longer than before increased from 2 hours to 3 or 3 and half hours. 
At night, he slept more than over 5 hours without waking up. Finally, I can have time to write here. 

I heard in some western countries, parents try to teach their babies sleep education; which means teaching babies to fall asleep alone, by himself without the parent's holding them. 

I think I can could teach my baby to falling asleep without my touch. 
But what if something an emergency such as an airway obstruction happens after the baby falls asleep alone, how would do you handle it? 
I think it might not be easy to handle it quickly if the parents sleep in a different room.

Notes:

<ol><li>“That” is used for things, “then” is used for times.</li><li>“infant care” is a general concept, so you won’t use a/an/the</li><li>You could use “about it” instead of “on it”, but it isn’t necessary.</li><li>We know it is since birth, so you can be a little more general.</li><li>Because it is feeding a baby, we assume that your wife helps, so you can just say “I had my wife”.</li><li>Because it is an event, you should use “this”</li><li>Term is a little bit confusing in this context.  It would normally mean how long it takes to feed the baby, not how long between feedings.</li><li>Alone and by himself mean the same thing.</li><li>“could” normally means you won’t do it.</li><li>You don’t use “something” with another noun.</li><li>“Would” is used for hypotheticals.</li></ol>

Good work

October 19, 2015
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