My last ten days I have been ill last ten days. I had an infection in my lungs. However, I&#039;m lucky because I can work from my house. It&#039;s important because I&#039;m freelance, so if I can&#0

Carles Info

My last ten days I have been ill last ten days. I had an infection in my lungs. However, I'm lucky because I can work from my house. It's important because I'm freelance, so if I can't work, then I don't get any money. When I'm sick, I feel very bad. I feel a little useless and don't bear to leave my home chores. Besides, when I stay at home all day, I have headache. Now, I'm better off. I hope to return to my routine next Monday. This morning I left my home for a while. I have gone to a shop to buy some tools for home. I've met a friend who is a fireman. He has a dangerous job, which I admire. After, I've bought some food and I've come back to my home to rest. I'm a little tired, but I'm happy to get back my health!

Oct 4, 2015 6:12 AM

Corrections · 2

My last ten days

I have been ill the last ten days. I had an infection in my lungs. However, I'm lucky because I can work from my house*. It's important because I'm freelance*, so if I can't work, then I don't get any money. When I'm sick, I feel very bad. I feel a little useless and don't bear to leave my home chores no entiendo. Besides, when I stay at home all day, I have headache.

Now, I'm better off. I hope to return to my routine next Monday. This morning I left my home for a while. I have gone to a shop to buy some tools for home. I've met a friend who is a fireman. He has a dangerous job, which I respect. After that , I bought some food and I've come back to my home to rest. Usaste el presente perfecto aquí pero creo que el preterito sería mejor, sobre todo con "bought", but supongo que el presente perfecto funciona también

I'm a little tired, but I'm happy to get back my health!

mejor: work from home

di: Now I am better.
<em>better off: signifca que tienes mas dinero ahora, que tienes un mejor trabajo, "better off" usualemente no se usa con la salud</em>

...
important because I freelance o I'm a freelancer; elige uno

October 4, 2015

My Last Ten Days

I have been ill for the last ten days. I had an lung infection in my lungs. However, I'm lucky because I can work from home. my house. It's important because I'm As a freelancer, this means no work, so no pay if I can't work, then I don't get any money. Whenever I'm sick, I feel terrible very bad. I feel a little anduseless and don't yet I can't bear to leave my home domestic chores undone. Besides, when I stay at home all day, At the same time, I have a throbbing headache.

Now, that I'm better off, I hope to return to my routine next Monday. This morning I left my home went out for a while. I had gone to a shopping for to buy some tools for get some home and. I've met a friend who is a fireman friend. He has a dangerous job, which I admire. After, I've bought some grocery shopping, food and I've came back to my home to rest.

I'm a little tired, but I'm happy to get back my health!