about something I don't know, too

    I had booked a train ticket for my the New Year's holiday. I thought my mom would very glad to hear that but it seems she wasn't. That's so sad. I am far away from my house so I can study at a a university. So, I usually miss my home, my parents and my sister. But my sister got married 6 months ago and moved to her husband's house. So, there's only my parents at home. I'm sure that they feel lonely. And I know that spending new year's day without their dear daughter will be so sad for them.

    But, my aunt (who lives where I'm studying in) said to my mom that it's better for me to stay here, and my mom always obeys my aunt because she's a teacher while she is a farmer. She thought that I should be here to help her make some service serve for the new year's day, instead of going back home to rest with my family. She thought that will make me more mature and have more experience in work. But, (I'm sure that) I completely disagree with her. I spent my summer vacation helping her delivery her goods. So I can't go on helping her on during new year's holiday (although, I know that she only wants the best for me). I want to spend more time with my parents because maybe, in the next few years, I will find a job here and live here. I won't have a lot of time for them. So, now, while I am still be a student, I must.

Hey hey. I think splitting the big paragraph into two paragraphs makes it look nicer. Many people don't like the sight of a huuuuge paragraph, and it makes them not want to read it. What do you think? :)

Your tenses in this notebook were very accurate! Just a couple of things: 1) All holidays should be capitalized, so it is New Year's Day. and 2) you were talking about your aunt, so when you talk about your aunt in 3rd person, you have to use 'her', not 'him'. Byebye