hannahshim9656
Grammar HI I have exam soon and practice Japanese writing. could you check my grammar of Japanese writing? this question is that post a massage on the student noticeboard giving information about the apartment. おんなフラットメイトをさがしです。そうじをいっしょにして人はいいです。そして、やさしくていいメイトがしています。私は韓国りょうりをよくするから、かんこくりょうりをきらい人はじょとむずかしいです。まだ、でんわぐださい。 I am looking for girl flatting mate who able to clean room together and is nice and kind person. I feel difficulty, if you hate Korean food because I often cook Korean food. please call. and I would like to say that " if you have interesting, call me." instead of just please call. and I posted a picture which I wrote... I am sorry about just posting picture. It takes time too long to write in Japanese on computer, so I posted. could you have a look and fix up the mistook sentence?? the writing is about a email in response to invite me to come to Japan. Thx so much,:)
Oct 5, 2015 11:47 AM
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いっしょにへやをそうじできる、おんなのこのフラットメイト(better: じょせいのルームメイト)をさがしいます。そうじをいっしょにして人はいいです。そして、やさしくてひとがらがいい(or やさしくてしんせつな)ルームメイトをさがしています。私は韓国りょうりをよくつくるのでするから、かんこくりょうりきらい人はちょっとじょとむずかしいです。(I would say: むずかしいとおもいます。)もしきょうみがあったらまだ、でんわださい。

I am looking for girl flatting mate who able to clean room together and is nice and kind person.

I feel difficulty, if you hate Korean food because I often cook Korean food. if you have interesting, call me.

 

*To make my suggestions for your sentences on the picture, I need English sentences. 

 

Good try! If you have doubt, please let me know. I hope this helps you, good luck! 

October 6, 2015
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