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有纹身的妈妈 说到有纹身的妈妈,此并不像看到的那么简单。在这里我们会看一下作为一个纹身的妈妈会教你的孩子们什么! There is more than meets the eye when it comes to inked-up mamas. Here, we take a look at what being a tattooed mom is teaching your kids! 1:他们不会害怕追求他们所有的梦想 (即使这意味着遇到一点痛苦) They won’t be afraid to go after what they want. (Even if a little pain is involved.) 2:你在皮肤上的艺术品无意帮助你的孩子们表达他们的创造力。 Your works of art on your skin unintentionally teach your kids to express their creativity. 3:你的孩子们会了解做一个独特的人的重要。 Your kids will learn the importance of being an individual. 4:他们会学作为一个领导,而不是个追随者。 They will learn to be a leader and not a follower. 5: 他们会了解艺术的重要。 They will learn the importance of art. 6:你会教你的孩子们,与众不同的价值高于一切。 You will teach your kids the value of being different. 7:作为一个有纹身的妈妈可会教你的孩子们探索,而且爱自己的身体。 Being a tattooed mother will teach your kids to explore and love their body. 8:你的孩子们不会害怕他们是谁,从内到外。 Your kids will not be afraid of who they are, inside and out. 9:你会教你的孩子们承诺的的价值。 You will teach your kids the value of commitment. 10:这会教他们作出一生的决定的重要。 It teaches them the importance of making a lifelong decision. 11:你的孩子们会学不把其他人的判断放在心上。 Your kids will learn to let other people's judgments slide off their back. 12:刺了纹身之前,他们会知道质量好和坏的纹身的差别。 They will learn the difference between a good tattoo and a bad one before they get one. 13:他们不会判断别人。 They won’t judge others. 14:你会教你的孩子要多加自信。 You will teach your kids to be more confident. 15:当然,他们会很骄傲地说你是他们的妈妈! And of course, they'll be proud to show you off as their mom!
Oct 5, 2015 1:28 PM
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有纹身的妈妈

 

说到有纹身的妈妈,(这,is often used at the beginning of an argumentative essay. While mentioning the same point once more we use 此)并不像看到的better 看起来。this is conventional to connecting 简单)那么简单。在这里我们会看一下(了解一下, is more established usage) 作为一个纹身的妈妈会教你的孩子们什么!

There is more than meets the eye when it comes to inked-up mamas. Here, we take a look at what being a tattooed mom is teaching your kids! (is that means eye meets the eye...)

1:他们不会害怕 (不畏惧 better,since its an essay so,比较正式)追求(他们所有=自己的, a bit like English‘是 反身代词 reflective pronoun, but i dont feel thats totally the same way)的梦想;即使这意味着遇到一点痛苦.

They won’t be afraid to go after what they want. (Even if a little pain is involved.)


2:你在皮肤上的艺术品无意+中帮助你的孩子们表达他们的创造力。
Your works of art on your skin unintentionally teach your kids to express their creativity.


3:你的孩子们会了解做一个独特的人的重要+性
Your kids will learn the importance of being an individual.


4:他们会学作为一个领导,而不是个追随者。
They will learn to be a leader and not a follower.


5: 他们会了解艺术的重要。
They will learn the importance of art.


6:你会教你的孩子们,与众不同的 价值+观 高于一切,价值观 itself is already something above in Chinese culture so without 高于一切 is OK。)
You will teach your kids the value of being different.


7:作为一个有纹身的妈妈可会教你的孩子们+  去探索,而且爱自己的身体。
Being a tattooed mother will teach your kids to explore and love their body.


8:你的孩子们不会害怕+展示他们是谁,从内到外。
Your kids will not be afraid of who they are, inside and out.


9:你会教你的孩子们承诺的的价值。
You will teach your kids the value of commitment.


10:这会教他们作出一生的决定的重要+性。 (one conceptual word)
It teaches them the importance of making a lifelong decision.


11:你的孩子们会学不把其他人的判断放在心上。
Your kids will learn to let other people's judgments slide off their back.


12:刺了纹身之前,他们会知道质量好和坏的纹身的差别=鉴别
They will learn the difference between a good tattoo and a bad one before they get one.


13:他们不会判断别人。 (this is very difficult to articulate to Chinese culture. i personally feel its hard to find the right word in Chinese about this; maybe we thought we ough to be judged by...Maybe we use an further step phrase called 下定论,下结论)
They won’t judge others.


14:你会教你的孩子要多加自信。
You will teach your kids to be more confident.


15:当然,他们会很骄傲地说你是他们的妈妈!
And of course, they'll be proud to show you off as their mom!

October 8, 2015

有纹身的妈妈

说到有纹身的妈妈,她们并不仅仅像我们看到的那样。现在我们就来看看,一个有纹身的妈妈会教给你的孩子们什么!
There is more than meets the eye when it comes to inked-up mamas. Here, we take a look at what being a tattooed mom is teaching your kids!

1:他们不会害怕追求他们的梦想 (即使这意味着会遇到一点痛苦)
They won’t be afraid to go after what they want. (Even if a little pain is involved.)
2:你的皮肤上的艺术品会无意帮助你的孩子们表达他们的创造力。
Your works of art on your skin unintentionally teach your kids to express their creativity.
3:你的孩子们会了解到做一个独特的人的重要性。
Your kids will learn the importance of being an individual.
4:他们会学着去做一个领导,而不是个追随者。
They will learn to be a leader and not a follower.
5: 他们会了解艺术的重要性。
They will learn the importance of art.
6:你会教你的孩子们认识与众不同的价值。
You will teach your kids the value of being different.
7:作为一个有纹身的妈妈会教你的孩子们去探索,并且爱惜自己的身体。
Being a tattooed mother will teach your kids to explore and love their body.
8:你的孩子们不会害怕他们是谁,从内到外。
Your kids will not be afraid of who they are, inside and out.
9:你会教你的孩子们承诺的价值。
You will teach your kids the value of commitment.
10:这会教他们作出终生决定的重要性。
It teaches them the importance of making a lifelong decision.
11:你的孩子们会学着不要过多受他人判断的影响。
Your kids will learn to let other people's judgments slide off their back.
12:在纹身之前,他们会了解优美的纹身和劣质纹身的差别。
They will learn the difference between a good tattoo and a bad one before they get one.
13:他们不会去判定别人。
They won’t judge others.
14:你会教你的孩子要更加自信。
You will teach your kids to be more confident.
15:当然,他们会很骄傲地说你是他们的妈妈!
And of course, they'll be proud to show you off as their mom!

October 5, 2015

有纹身的妈妈

说到有纹身的妈妈,并不像看到的那么简单。在这里我们会看一下作为一个纹身的妈妈会教你的孩子们什么!
There is more than meets the eye when it comes to inked-up mamas. Here, we take a look at what being a tattooed mom is teaching your kids!

1:他们不会害怕追求他们所有的梦想 (即使这意味着遇到一点痛苦)
They won’t be afraid to go after what they want. (Even if a little pain is involved.)
2:你在皮肤上的艺术品无意帮助你的孩子们表达他们的创造力。
Your works of art on your skin unintentionally teach your kids to express their creativity.
3:你的孩子们会了解做一个独特的人的重要。
Your kids will learn the importance of being an individual.
4:他们会学作为一个领导,而不是个追随者。
They will learn to be a leader and not a follower.
5: 他们会了解艺术的重要。
They will learn the importance of art.
6:你会教你的孩子们,与众不同的价值高于一切。
You will teach your kids the value of being different.
7:作为一个有纹身的妈妈可会教你的孩子们探索,而且爱自己的身体。
Being a tattooed mother will teach your kids to explore and love their body.
8:你的孩子们不会害怕他们是谁,从内到外。
Your kids will not be afraid of who they are, inside and out.
9:你会教你的孩子们承诺的的价值。
You will teach your kids the value of commitment.
10:这会教他们作出一生的决定的重要。
It teaches them the importance of making a lifelong decision.
11:你的孩子们会学不把其他人的判断放在心上。
Your kids will learn to let other people's judgments slide off their back.
12:刺了纹身之前,他们会知道质量好和坏的纹身的差别。
They will learn the difference between a good tattoo and a bad one before they get one.
13:他们不会判断别人。
They won’t judge others.
14:你会教你的孩子要多加自信。
You will teach your kids to be more confident.
15:当然,他们会很骄傲地说你是他们的妈妈!
And of course, they'll be proud to show you off as their mom!

October 6, 2015
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