The college years are the best years in a personss life (my first Toefl writing practise)

The statement asks if the college years are the best time in a persons life, well i dont think it is they are. i am sure that all people who went to college had realy great time out there. But we can not say they all had the best time.
For instance me, i graduated from Gazi University at in Ankara as a chemical engineer last year. But that school was not my first choice, i used to dreaming about living in Eskisehir. When i found out that i couldnt get enough points for Eskisehir, i was devastated. But i didnt have enough courage to attent attempt the exam one more time, the only choise choice in front of me was the Ankara and i took it. In the/my first 2 years i did not attend classes, i did not meet with anyone, never been in went to any social activity. I was visiting my family once a week. In On other days, i was just sleeping in my apartment. It took me so long to accept my situation. Is Does that means i never enjoyed a thing at college? Of course not, i had so many great friends later, we became like a family, I also meet met my current girlfriend in there. But also i could never forget the first two years. Since i didnt attent my classes, my grades gone were awful. I needed to work much harder then than anybody in my classes to fix those grades. After my third year, i became so obsessed about studying hard that, i realised that i forget had forgotten what a social life is like. But anyway with hardwork and passionate i graduated my from college. But i have never forget that forgotten those bad memories.
In conclusion education tooks takes the biggest part of our lives without doubt. Of course beside lessons, we do learn friendship, love, respect, success etc. but it also teaches people, life is not going on like in the fairy tales. There would always be barriers. I meet met my biggest barriers in my college years, so i dont think the college years are the best years for everone everyone.

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Great work Sinan,

I understood your writing very clearly and was never unsure about your intended meaning. The only place you seem to make errors are with minor spelling mistakes and occasionally with tense. For instance "Meet" is future tense, "Met" is past tense, and "Meeting" is present tense - however there are no easy rules for these intricacies; just a matter of practice.

I wish my Turkish were anywhere near as good as your English!

-Liam