Alison
Describe a Place You Will Never Forget (a compsition) I want to practice different compositions. it is about description composition. Let's start below I will never forget a amusement in Hualien. This place fill of laugh and everyone's face show a sweet smiling all the time despite the weather is very hot. It's the first time I come here. There are many facilities make everybody happy and excited but sometimes make people crying. Actually, There also have animals of activities. For example, you can watch, feed, touch and even ride them closely. In addition to these, you also can just only buy you want to buy in here. Therefore, that's why this amusement is very famous because every ages person can come here and also that's why I will never forget here in my life. I need to someone can help me to improve about it, Thanks for you a lot :)
Oct 7, 2015 6:30 AM