Monique
atashi Konnichiwa, Atashi wa Monique desu to niyuurokusai desu. Atashi wa Doitsu no shusshin desu. Genzai atashi wa seito desu. Atashi no haha no namae wa Ilse. Okiniiri iro wa shiro to kuro. Demo shiro-iro no zubon daikirai desu. Atashi no hea wa chairo desu. Atashi wa ni shimai to kyoudai imasu. Atashi wa kekkon shiteiru ka nai desu. Atashi wa dokushin desu.
Oct 7, 2015 10:29 AM
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(w)atashi

Konnichiwa,
Atashi wa Monique desu

to niyjuurokusai desu.
Atashi wa Doitsu no shusshin desu.

Genzai atashi wa gakuseiseito desu.

Atashi no haha no namae wa Ilse.

Okiniiri no iro wa shiro to kuro.

Demo shiro-iro no zubon wa daikirai desu.

Atashi no kamihea wa chairo desu.

Atashi wa futarini shimai to kyoudai ga imasu. Atashi wa kekkon shiteiru tumakanai desu. Atashi wa dokushin desu.

October 10, 2015
I do know Hiragana and Katakana but until yesterday I didn't know how to use it on my mobil and I still can't figure it out on my Computer. I used atashi because my former teacher told me I would Sound more natural by using it. Thanks you for telling me that I was wrong. I will watch it in the future.
October 10, 2015
Hi, I'd really lijecto recommend you to learn the Japanese characters, hiragana and katakana, first. Also I recommend you not to use "atashi", please write "watashi" because "atashi" is very colloquial and informal so it's used between close people.
October 9, 2015
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