Karine
Double check - IELTS task one Hi guys, Would you mind correcting it? Also, I accept tips! Many thanks :) "The table lists the national consume expenditure of three categories of five countries in the year of 2002. The five countries are Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey and the categories listed in the table are (1) food/drink/tobacco, (2) clothing/footwear and (3) leisure/education. While Turkey spent almost 32.14% of its yield in food/drink/tobacco, Sweden spent around half of it (15.77%). Both Italy and Spain had very similar patterns and spent on food/drink/tobacco 16.36% and 18.80% respectively. For the item clothing/footwear Italy was the only country that spent significantly more than the other countries. Alone, Italy consumed 9% while Turkey, holding the second position, spent exactly 6.63% of its national consumer on clothing and footwear. Comparing with the percentage of the previous categories commented, the item leisure/education held the least levels. The country which most spent its national consume expenditure was Turkey with 4.35%. The second one was Sweden (with 3.22%), following by Italy, Ireland and Spain. Their percentage in this category was 3.20%, 2.21% and 1.98% respectively".
Oct 7, 2015 12:16 PM