Miguel Ángel
A Story One day, I was alone and bored in the street. Then I decided to ride bicycle and go to the beach. Suddenly, I fall of the bicycle and I hurt my head. Nobody saw me in that moment on the ground. I had a lot of blood because I had done a big break. A minute or two later, a young couple took me to the hospital quickly, and there, the doctors cured me.
Oct 7, 2015 6:06 PM
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,,,,,, and there, the doctors cured me.

 

It would be better to say the doctors TREATED YOU.

 

In accident and emergency rooms they TREAT you.

 

Example sentences: They treated me for a broken leg, cuts and bruises. They treated my infection with antibiotics. After lengthy treatment, I was cured! Yippeeeee!

October 7, 2015
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One day, I was alone and bored in the street. Then I decided to ride my bicycle and go to the beach. Suddenly, I fell off the bicycle and I hurt my head. Nobody saw me in that moment on the ground. I lost/there was a lot of blood because I had been hurt badly.
A minute or two later, a young couple took me to the hospital quickly, and there, the doctors cured me.

October 7, 2015
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One day, I was feeling alonely and bored in the street. If you are walking on the street when you felt this, then the sentence should be, "One day, I was feeling lonely and bored as I was walking on the street."  Then I decided to ride my bicycle and go to the beach. Suddenly, as I was cycling, I fell of the bicycle and I hurt my head. Nobody No one saw me in that moment as I hit on the ground. I had a lot of blood because I had done a big break There was much blood loss as I had a gash.


However, a minute or two later, a young couple took/rushed me to the hospital quickly, and there, the doctors there took care of me. cured meYou cannot use "cure" because you are not suffering from an illness or disease.

October 7, 2015
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