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my diary 3 10/9/2015 1:50AM Tonight, my friend ignored me because I can't remember exactly her hometown. I know I don't care enough on other person, even my parrents. I can't remember their birthday. I'm so bad, am not I? It's so late now. But I still so surciuos that I don't want to go to bed yet. I have just finished reading a story, but I haven't did my homework yet. Tomorrow is deadline for it. It has usually rained recently. Just some minutes before, there was a loud thunder which make us felt sudden.
Oct 8, 2015 6:50 PM
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my diary 3

10/9/2015
1:50AM
Tonight, my friend ignored me because I cacouldn't remember (exactly) her hometown. I know I don't care enough on about other people person, even my parrents. I can't remember their birthday. I'm so bad, am not aren't I? *
It's so late now. But I am still so surciuos ? that I don't want to go to bed yet. I have just finished reading a story, but I haven't did done my homework yet. Tomorrow is the deadline for it.
It has usually rained a lot recently. Just some minutes earlier/before, there was a loud thunder clap which make us we felt suddenly.

*the grammatically correct form would be ' . . am I not ?', but it is more usual to use the [incorrect] 'aren't I ?'.

October 9, 2015
I'm so glad to hear that you say. When I can't go to bed easily, I usually listen to music (long before) or read novel (recently). Then, I went to my sleep anywhen I don't realize.
October 9, 2015
I sometime have problem in sleeping too, when I can't sleep I open my laptop and start reading something interesting till I fall sleep , what do u like to do when u cant sleep ?
October 8, 2015
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