ZoeLi
my easy work I have been working in the new job for 3 days. I think everything is good. My new job is in a hospital, but I am not a doctor, as you know I always in the position of marketing. It is a high level and very expensive hospital. Logisting cost nearly 2000 rmb...it isn't for common public people but for a few rich people. New job and new hospital which was opened just 1 year, high price,.. so I am very idle every day even write something in here :D
Oct 9, 2015 8:17 AM
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My Easy Work

I have been working at my new job for 3 days. I think everything is well. My new job is at a hospital, but I am not a doctor. As you know, I am always in a marketing position. It is a high quality, expensive hospital. Lodging* costs nearly 2000 rmb... It isn't for the common public*, but rather, it is for a few rich people. My new job at a new, expensive hospital that has only been open for one year has lot of free time. I even have time to write something here. :D


*Lodging is a very bad word to use for this. You should say overnight hospital stays cost nearly 2000 rmb.

*It is very vague here, so it is hard to understand whether the hospital is made just for rich people to use or only rich people use it because the common public cannot afford it. So you can say, "Because the hospital is expensive, a few rich people use it rather than the common public." or "It isn't open to the commonly public, only rich people."

October 9, 2015
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