Please correct these sentences

1. Ann has a rigid mind, so it is impossible to influence on her worldview.
2. Don't be so rigid; expand the frontiers of your possibilities.
3. A caterpillar turned into a butterfly.
4. Tom made a wood flat glossy floor.
5. I am easily attached to new people, but on the other hand, it is also easy for me to end relationships with them.
6. Tom has repaired his car.
7. Ann has gotten a desired gift.
8. A predator doesn't have mercy on any victim.
9. Ann has enchanted Tom with her authentic glorious appearance.
10. Tom admired how Ann danced in the downpour.

Please correct these sentences

1. Ann has a rigid mind, so it is impossible to influence on her worldview opinion.
2. Don't be so rigid, expand the frontiers of your possibilities.
3. A caterpillar turned out into a butterfly.
4. Tom made a wood flat glossy flat wooden floor.
5. On the one hand, I am easily attached to new people, but on the other hand, it is also easy for me to tear the end relationships with them. (I easily attach to new people, but it is also easy for me to end relationships with them.)
6. Tom has repaired his car.
7. Ann has got a desired gift. (Ann has got/received a gift she desired/wanted.)
8. A predator doesn't have mercy for any victim. (... doesn't show mercy to any victim.)
9. Ann has enchanted Tom with her authentic glorious appearance. (Tom has been enchanted by Ann's authentic glorious appearance.)
10. Tom admired how Ann danced under the downpour.(danced in the rain/danced despite the rain.)

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