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The presentation script -She was married to an economics professor on 1920, and later had 3 children. Ended up she became mother of three and grandmother of seven. -1916 she said about being a mom and dad that "Here you suddenly had the most important job you have ever had--and you had no training, so parents have to have some techniques and skill and information," Taylor said . -Taylor said that "My own little boy just cried the first day, and every time he saw Mama he had to come and have a hug," "But after they were there awhile, I think they felt they had 20 mothers instead of one. “We thought it was awfully good for them to have lunch together; that was part of the socialization," It began to take fire in California. The cooperative nursery school concept spread.
Oct 10, 2015 8:29 AM
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The presentation script

-She was married to an economics professor on in 1920, and later had 3 children. Ended up she became mother of three and grandmother of seven. (This is okay when you're speaking informally, but it's better to say "She ended up becoming the mother of three and grandmother of seven.")
-1916 she said about being a mom and dad that "Here you suddenly had the most important job you have ever had--and you had no training, so parents have to have some techniques and skill and information," Taylor said . In 1916, she spoke about being a mom and a dad. "In here, you can suddenly have the most important job that you will ever have--and you have no training, so parents ought to/need to/must (have to have is okay in speech but awkward in writing) have some techniques, skills and information," Taylor said.
-Taylor said, that "My own little boy just cried on the first day, and every time he saw Mama he had to come and have a hug,." "But after they were there awhile for a while, I think they felt that they had 20 mothers instead of one." “We thought it was awfully good for them to have lunch together; that was part of the socialization,." It began to take fire in California. The cooperative nursery school concept spread.

October 10, 2015

The presentation script

 

-She was married to an economics professor in 1920, and later had three children. She ended up becoming a mother of three and a grandmother of seven.

-In 1916, she said that when you become a parent, "Here You suddenly have the most important job you have ever had--and you've had no training."

-"Parents have to know some useful techniques and skills and information," Taylor said.

-Taylor said, that "My own little boy just cried the whole first day, and every time he saw his Mama he had to come to me for a hug. But after they had been there for a while, I think they felt like they had 20 mothers instead of just one."

-"We thought it was awfully good for them to have lunch together; that was part of the socialization."

-It began to take fire in California; the cooperative nursery school concept started to spread.

December 11, 2015

The presentation script

-She was married to an economics professor on 1920, and later threeh  children had born . Ended up she became mother of three and grandmother of seven children .
-1916 she said about being a mom and sais that "Here you suddenly had the most important job you have ever had--and you had no training, so parents have to have some techniques and skill and information," Taylor said .
-Taylor said that "My own little boy just cried the first day, and every time he saw Mama he had to come and have a hug," "But after they were there awhile, I think they felt they had 20 mothers instead of one. “We thought it was awfully good for them to have lunch together; that was part of the socialization," It began to take fire in California. The cooperative nursery school concept spread.

October 10, 2015
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