Study and improve yourself I graduate from the faculty of law along four years study very hard and I really do my best after that I complete and take master degree in that also I do my best .unfortuna

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Study and improve yourself I graduate from the faculty of law along four years study very hard and I really do my best after that I complete and take master degree in that also I do my best .unfortunately I work in governmental organization it was the worst year in my life although I learn a lot of things about life but this year harm me a lot once up on time I was in holiday and meet an candian friend she was work at top ranking university and we talk about studying abroad it was very nice discussion and add to me a lot or correctly change all my goals .she said to me you must do what you want what make you happy when you practice so I try know to find my real career which is teaching . To be professor it is not easy at all but no thing impossible I have an belief in my self that I can do any thing and any one can reach her goal whatever it's difficulty . A lot of people said to me you can't but I just try and I will still try some times I feel weak but a lot of time I feel I can . Studying abroad specially as for Arabic women isn't easy because a lot of reasons like language , some racial people , different cultures and other reasons . However I will still in my way and ask God for help .

Oct 10, 2015 12:14 PM

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Study and improve yourself

I graduated from the faculty of law for four years. I studied very hard and I really did my best. After that I completed and took master degree where I also did my best. Unfortunately I work in governmental organization. It was the worst year in my life, although I learn a lot of things about living. But this year harmed me a lot. Once I was on holiday and I met a Canadian friend who was working at a top ranking university. We talked about studying abroad it was very nice discussion. She helped me a lot to set new goals. She said to me that you must do what you want what make you happy when you practice. So I know to find my actual career which is teaching.
To be a professor it is not easy at all but nothing impossible I believe that I can do anything and anyone can reach her goal whatever its difficulty. A lot of people said to me you can't, but I just try and I will still try. Sometimes I feel weak but a lot of time I feel I can. Studying abroad specially as an Arabic women isn't easy for a lot of reasons, including language, racist people, different cultures. However I will continue working hard and ask God for help.

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Make sure you use past tense verbs when talking about the past. Also watch for run-on sentences (sentences that are too long). Racial means "about race" and racist means "discriminating based on race". I wish you the best of luck with your future as a teacher and as a student of language studying abroad.

October 10, 2015

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