my friend My dear friend HAHA immegranted to Japan after she graduated from high school.She will come back to China in Spring Festival.All of my friends are looking forwad to seeing her.She misses us,

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my friend My dear friend HAHA immegranted to Japan after she graduated from high school.She will come back to China in Spring Festival.All of my friends are looking forwad to seeing her.She misses us,too. And she wants to stay China for over two monthes.But her father don't allow her leave him for so long time. I don't know what to say to this situation. i feel sad.

Oct 10, 2015 2:32 PM

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my friend

My dear friend Haha immigrated to Japan after she graduated from high school. She will come back to China for the Spring Festival. All of my friends are looking forward to seeing her. She misses us too. And she wants to stay in China for over two months. But her father won't let her leave him for such a long time. I don't know what to say in this situation. I feel sad.

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Make sure there is a space after a period. :) I hope you can sort this out and spend some time with your friend.

October 10, 2015

m My friend

My dear friend HAHA imme immigranted to Japan after she graduated from high school.She will come back to China in for the Spring Festival.All of my friends are looking forwad to seeing her. She misses us,too. And she wants to stay China for over two monthes.But However, her father will not let don't allow her leave him for so such a long time. I don't know what to say to this situation. i feel sad.

I agree with Medaline. Carefully with the spelling because it is so important.

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Have a nice day.

October 10, 2015

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