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The First Film I watched I still remember the amazing experience that I first time watched the film in the cinema. It was with my dad. He kept his promise that if I got a good marks in exams he would take me to watch the film in the cinema. The film's name is . The plot is about a young man whose father was killed by a general. The general is also the person who betrayed the Tang Emperor. The young man escaped to Shaolin temple, learned kungfu and set out to kill the traitor. With the helps of all the monks, he succeeded. He also saved the true emperor and got the great rewards from the emperor. The young man is acted by Jet Lee, my favorite actor, and that is his first film.
Oct 13, 2015 12:12 PM
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The First Film I watched

I still remember the amazing experience that when first time watched the a film in the cinema for the first time. It was with my dad. He kept his promise that if I got a good marks in exams he would take me to watch the a film in the cinema.

The film's name is . The plot is about a young man whose father was killed by a general. The general is also the person who betrayed the Tang Emperor. The young man escaped to Shaolin temple, learned kungfu and set out to kill the traitor. With the helps help of all the monks, he succeeded. He also saved the true emperor and got (<em>received</em> would be a better word choice, since <em>got</em> implies that the young man took something on his own accord, and <em>received</em> implies the young man was given a gift from someone else) the great rewards from the emperor.

The young man is acted portrayed <em>or </em>played by Jet Lee, my favorite actor, and that is his first film. (or "Jet Li, my favorite actor, played (or <em>portrayed</em>) the young man and this was his first film.)

October 13, 2015
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