Joshua
danas, osejćam piće ono rano je ali zamislim moj vikend. Molim, Pomoć sa poslam!!! Ja sada želim ide u bar; a priča moj prijateli!! haha. Its early but Im dreaming of my weekend. Please save me from work!! I want to go to the bar now and talk to my friends. Thanks for reading. Hvala za čitanje
Oct 23, 2015 4:36 PM
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danas, osjećam piće (/Predosjećam piće)

 

ono rano je ali zamislim zamišljam moj vikend.

 

Molim, za pomoć sa poslom!!!

/Molim vas spasite me posla!!!

 

Ja sada želim ide ići u bar; a i pričati sa mojim prijateljima!! haha.

Its early but Im dreaming of my weekend. Please save me from work!! I want to go to the bar now and talk to my friends.

Thanks for reading.
Hvala za čitanje

October 23, 2015
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Today I feel like a drink??

Danas mi se pije. or Danas želim na piće.

 

Rano je, ali sanjam o svom vikendu. Molim vas, spasite me posla!!! Sada želim ici u bar i  razgovarati sa svojim prijateljima!

Its early but Im dreaming of my weekend. Please save me from work!! I want to go to the bar now and talk to my friends.

 

Thanks for reading.
Hvala na čitanju.

 

Zamisliti - to imagine

Sanjati - to dream

Govoriti - to speak

Pričati - to tell

(you can use pričati instead of razgovarati, even govorili, but never use razgovarati instead of pričati or govoriti)

Razgovarati - to talk

 

The use of I is unnecessary.

Who? I.

Tko? Ja.

 

I go...

Ja Idem...

 

Pozdrav :)

October 27, 2015
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danas, osejćam piće

o Ono (1) , rano je, ali zamišljam slim moj vikend. Molim za , P pomoć sa poslom (2) !! am!!! Ja sada želim ići de u bar; a pričati sa mojim prijateljima!! i!! haha.

Its early but Im dreaming of my weekend. Please save me from work!! I want to go to the bar now and talk to my friends.

Thanks for reading.
Hvala za čitanje 

 

1. This "ono" is unnecessary. Even it does not look so professional when you write it. It would be the same if I would start a sentence like: "You know... " , "I mean... " , etc 

2. It is OK, but if you do not want to work at all, maybe it is better to say "spasite me posla" because to save means spasiti. 

 

Not at all Josh, it's a true pleasure. 

See you soon :) 

October 23, 2015
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