kate
Family There are 4 people in my family: my dad, mom, my younger brother and me. We have lived in PY since I was born. My dad is 49 years old and he is a teacher. My mom is too. They taught in a high school. My dad likes playing china chess and growing orchid very much. He usually invites his friends to chat about these topics. I used to climb a mountain to find this flower with him. My mother likes shopping and cooking. She cooks very well, I wish I could cook like her. When I'm in the home, she and I often go shopping together. My younger brother is 12 years old. He is always disturbing me when I have free - time. Sometimes, I crazy for him. But now I have to live in another city, I feel alone and miss them so much.
Nov 4, 2015 8:41 AM
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Family

There are 4 people in my family: my dad, mom, my younger brother and me. We have lived in PY since I was born. My dad is 49 years old and he is a teacher. My mom is too. They teach in a high school. My dad likes playing china chess and growing orchids very much. He usually invites his friends to chat about these topics. I used to climb a mountain to find this flower with him. My mother likes shopping and cooking. She cooks very well, I wish I could cook like her. When I'm at home, she and I often go shopping together. My younger brother is 12 years old. He is always disturbing me when I have free - time. Sometimes, I go crazy at him. But now I have to live in another city, I feel alone and miss them so much.

 

Hello Kate,

Lovely text with just a couple of mistakes. We very often don't realise how much someone means to us until we don't see them every day. Don't worry, he will still be there when you visit home and will probably still be a pain, just you may be a little more tolerant now.

 

I changed 'taught' to 'teach' as I presume they are both still working. If they have finished work then your version is correct.

 

Bob

November 4, 2015
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November 29, 2015
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November 4, 2015
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