Upahaar

Hijo haamile eauta upahaar praapta garyau., eauta tyo upahaar Nepalbata thiyo. Haamro Kathmanduko bata saathile haamilai yak cheese pathaaunubhaeko thiyo. Hijo beluka mero shrimaanle ra maile tyo(1) cheese khaayau. Tyo cheese dherai mitho thiyo. Ani hami aajaa ra bholi pani tyo cheese pani khaana sakchhau. Ramro chha!

1. You can use 'yo (this)', if the viewer/reader can actually see the cheese. Otherwise, tyo (that) is used. 

2. By using pani immediately after aaja and bholi, the sentence translates as, ... today and tomorrow as well. This is more logical because you have mentioned that you enjoyed/ate the cheese yesterday. 

If you put pani after cheese, it translates as, .... we can eat (other things and) cheese also. 

Good work.