Anna
Are you brain in vessel? I was thinking about what I can write here. Italki sugesst me some writng ideas, but whenI imagined story about my funny experience, I felt that it could be funny only for me. I decided to write about book witch i reading now. This note not will be directtly about a book, more like about one chapter. This book called "50 philosphical theories wich you should to know" one of this theories was a theory of Philosopher Hilary Putnam. Hilary Putnam invated the theory, according to witch our brain exist in vessel with contecting in stimulus apparatus. This apparatus making an ilusion of life, that's mean that our hands, legs, family, nature and all this world exist only in our minds. So if is true every single person is only like "brain in vessel" and everything it's nothing more than complicated projection. What do you think about this? Are you brain in vessel or you are exist in real? I think, that even we are just brain in vessel this our reality.
Nov 20, 2015 3:33 PM
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Are you brain in vessel?

I was thinking about what I could write here. Italki suggested me some writing ideas, but when I imagined a story about my funny experience, I felt that it might only be funny  for me.
I decided to write about a book which I am reading now. This note  will not be directly about a book, more like about one chapter.
This book is  called "50 philosophical theories which you should to know" one of these theories was a theory of Philosopher Hilary Putnam. Hilary Putnam invented the theory, according to which our brain exists in a vessel with connecting stimulus apparatus. This apparatus gives an illusion of life, that

means that our hands, legs, family, nature and all this world exists only in our minds. So if it is true every single person is only like a "brain in a vessel" and everything is nothing more than a complicated projection.

What do you think about this? Are you a brain in a vessel or do you are exist in reality?

I think, that even if we are just a brain in a vessel, this our reality.

 

Hello Anna,

Interesting text and I don't know the answer to your question. it is too late in the week to think too hard! There are quite a few mistakes but most of them are spelling mistakes. Take a little more care with 'a', I know you don't have it in Polish - it means one (of many)

 

Hope this helps

 

Bob

November 20, 2015
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