New beginning
Dear diary, I started Italki yesterday to improve my english skills and make new friends. I've always thoughted thought that I have some langauge language problems for someways in some ways. First of all, I cannot distinguish the correct setenses sentences. If there is a grammer problems problem such as tense or something, I just can't find it. The second problem is reusing the same words. I can't help stop myself to write or speak from writing or speaking exactly the same words at in one paragraph. I've found it weird. Although I had studied english at school, it's it was only for exam exams. I sometimes thought that my language-structure is was like this ; this: 1)words for Korean-english-exams / 2) lively speaking words. It is sad that I have so few words to use in real life. I wish I could find some ways to break this out. My final and the biggest problem is that I've some fears about a fear of talking. Lol. For example, I made a phone call to the immigration office of Austrailia for my visa. Currently Recently , the rules for foreingers foreigners had changed and I found the regulations for that day. I called the authority office to make sure check the information.Hopefully I could catch caught the sentences they speak said, but I couldn't help myself to think about my poor english skills. Sometimes I'm thinking I think that my language speed cannot follow those of my thinking.
Whoaaaaaa
I wish I can to improve my english skills somehow, and I don't want to feel pressure about language anymore.
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Your English writing is quite good. Your ideas are clear and the way you write them makes sense. English has a lot of weird rules and some of those seme to mees you up. But don't worry. A lot of native English speakers make the same mistakes. Just keep practicing! Oh, and good luck with your trip to Australia.
New beginning
Dear diary, I started Italki yesterday to improve my english skills and make new friends. I've always thoughted that I have some language problems for someways in someways. First of all, I cannot distinguish the incorrect setences. If there is a grammar problem such as tense or something else, I just can't find it. The second problem is reusing the same words. I can't help myself to write or speak exactly same words at one paragraph. I've found it weird. Although I had studied english at school, it's only for exams. I sometimes thought that my language-structure is like this ; 1)words for Korean-english-exams / 2) lively speaking words. It is sad that I have few words to use in real life. I wish I could find some ways to break out of this out. My final and the biggest problem is that I've some fears about talking. Lol. For example, I made a phone call to the Australian immigration office of Austrailia for my visa. Currently, the rules for foreigners have changed and I found the regulations applying for that day. I called the authority office to make sure of the information. Hopefully I could catch the sentences they speak, but I couldn't help myself to think thinking about my poor English skills. Sometimes I'm thinking that my language speed cannot follow my thoughts. those of my thinking.
Whoaaaaaa
I wish I could improve my English skills somehow, and I don't want to feel pressure about language anymore.
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thoughted - the past tense of "to think" is "thought", a lot of English verbs add -ed to make the past tense but there are many exceptions. Our English children make this sort of word when they are learning to speak. They have mentally adopted the normal form of the past tense and apply it everywhere. This is called an over-regularization error. It is a good thing, it means that they are learning, it's just that there are many exceptions.
for someways - I can't recall seeing for used in this way, it would be normal to use in. I have also left out the first some - it seems redundant to me.
compare - there is a grammar problems -- there are grammar problems --- use are for plural. So I have corrected the sentence to "there is a grammar problem"
I have added else after something as the sentence seems incomplete to me without that additional word.
I'm not sure what you mean by this sentence - <em>I can't help myself to write or speak exactly same words at one paragraph</em>
<em>I've some fears about talking</em> - I share that problem -- where to start ? what to say ? will the other person be patient ? And so,we are silent.
You can say immigration office of Australia - but it is normally written in the form that I have typed.
I called the authority office to make sure the information -
Spending time in a country where English is the only language in regular use will help you. You do have a good vocabulary, your writing demonstrates that, so compared to my Korean skills, you are an intermediate speaker of my language.
I hope that your stay here is enjoyable
